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   Irma.Arisa.Laye 10/27/07 . chapter 1kyAa! :) you have to continue writing this,.,. ;) hehehehehhe this might actually turn out to be something really good you know! ;D but please,.,. finish Kissing Mikagami first! ;) i love that fic and this one too! :) "Galingan mo! Mabuhay ang Filipino! hehehehehhehe Yngatz Lagi!" |
| satomika 10/9/07 . chapter 1 hindi namam sa kulang ang laman... the kiss siad it all... although ang kulang, yung mga scenes... dapat hindi lang kiss! hihihihihihihihi |
| syao-chan 9/27/07 . chapter 1 One word I could think of in this story is 'rushed'. There were little technical errors here and there in the story, such as: - Being Yanagi, she followed suit but looked to wear Fuuko was previously looking. - It was a simple typo, I'm sure, but it does distract some readers at times. More careful proofreading will help improve your piece :) A dare kiss is a common plot device in teen romance stories. But I'm sure that the more you write stories, the more you'll refine your skills in adding original layers and twists to even the oldest tale known to man. I wish you the best of luck in doing that! |
| Peppercorn 9/11/07 . chapter 1 Girls are so evil hahha...cute ) |
| Blackrose2005 9/1/07 . chapter 1 Ah... Awesome! XD |
| blackscarlet562 5/17/07 . chapter 1 great story! |
| Nils 5/1/07 . chapter 1 real nice till now. but i wont be able to tell anything abt de other chapters unless u update. so pls do update soon! will b w8ing. |
| SnowCharms 3/3/07 . chapter 1 Squeal! Kawai! Update! |
| khryzle kawaii 9/19/06 . chapter 1 hey this fic is cool!but isnt there another chapter?this is not supposed to be a oneshot...how sad that it is... |
| carmelahere 8/14/06 . chapter 1 oNe of tHe mAny tAlentEd fiLipiNos(?)... u R a filiPinO riGht? NiCe fIc EniWEiz... i mIgHt dAre sOmeOne tHat... oR mAybE mYself... nIce ExcUse To kiSS sUmoNe... |
| sempai-sama 3/15/06 . chapter 1 o_o i didnt see this one. this is really cute! :D please write a sequel. |
| yanagi-chyan 11/30/05 . chapter 1 wow! why haven't i read this before? kya! i love it! omg, is this a one-shot? no way! continue! _ obviously there's more to tell and i can't wait! really, it's so good! okay, i'm babbling now... but have i told you it's really good? *winks* |
| tofuu fan 11/21/05 . chapter 1 com on u cnt leave me hanging! please make another chap. asap! hehehehe! i love fuuko tokiya fics! |
| Mrs Hatake Itachi 11/17/05 . chapter 1 wala bang additional na second part muka nga bitin e but ikaw naman ang nagsulat nyan kaya kaw bahala kung dagdag mo but pls. do! |
| FukuWija 11/12/05 . chapter 1 Dagdagan mo! Make another CHAP! PLEASE! SIGE na! XD I LIKE it so MUCH! NOO! I don't like it! I LOVE it!1 X3 |
