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| FlamedraSeer 2006-04-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's really good! I liked the part about the tomato with red leaves! |
| Lady Lithe 2005-10-28 ch 1,  | abuseVery nice. ^^ Hmm, she's a bit out of character though... I mean, heh...she's so shy around him. ^-^ But it was a very nice way of making it Daisuke's POV. Don't see too many of those out there, you don't. Oh, it would have been nice if it was longer, instead of a oneshot. I could see how you would do that... But the way you did it was nice too! ^^ Keep up the good work! |
| DaisukeNiwacute! 2005-10-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood but add more story. Its very descriptive, but it needs some backround information. |
| sekisetsuryou 2005-10-26 ch 1, | abuseGreat! it's so cute and sweet! riku > risa i think you might've used "reverie" incorrectly.. i think it's a noun |
| Sanguine Reverie 2005-10-26 ch 1, | abuseAww! How cute! I just recently got into D N Angel and am waiting on the second volume in the manga books... Sadly, I dun have the show. Great work, though! |
| Kazumi Kairi or Kairi-chan 2005-10-26 ch 1, | abuseAww... so Kawai between Daisuke and Riku!! I just loved it so much! |
| Kairi2Sora 2005-10-26 ch 1, | abuseThis is sweet and nice. I'm going to add this to my favs. |