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| thestinger 2008-08-20 ch 20, | abuseOkay, you haven't updated in a few months. So the next chapter is ready, right? You write with a skill that is few and far between in Fanfiction. It would be a tragedy if you didn't finish this fic. I don't want it to be lost; it's far too good. I realize that RL doesn't always go to plan, and I sincerly hope you haven't died, but please (I'm begging here!) finish this fic! It's among the best I've ever read and I've read alot of them. ~thestinger |
| johnapple 2008-08-06 ch 19, | abuseI love this story. I love the way you are writing it. Thank you. |
| NanaoFan 2008-08-05 ch 1, | abuseOh this is brilliant! please update soon! Love the angsty Harry. Dumbledore drools!! twins rock! |
| Is Belle 2008-07-13 ch 20, anon. | abuseWhat can I say about this story? I love it! I love Harry's interaction with everyone, especially with Dudley during their fancy camping trip. I love the way I feel like I'm going to explode along with Harry everytime someone questions his visions. Great job with that. Hope you'll be updating soon because I want to see Harry kick some more Death Muncher's arse and tear into the Order of the Passive Chickens some more. Go Harry. Thanks. |
| xturkeyxsexygranneh 2008-06-27 ch 20, | abuseUPDATE NOW! Man, it's been a long time since I read any good HP fics lately. Great job. WIsh you'll update more though. Btw, I like the fact that Harry's not THAT powerful.. and it's a bit weird. His attitude and stuff was so different in the like.. first 10 chapters? Before the McAlpins were attacked. It's such a change of character and there's not even a hint of it after the attack. But it's all good. Stuff makes sense. |
| johnapple 2008-05-28 ch 20, | abuseI love reading this story. Thank you.. |
| daniel 2008-05-14 ch 11, anon. | abusei feel like your using sod 2 much |
| Lil Ole Me 97 2008-05-12 ch 20, | abuseHoly CRAP! It's been quite a while since I read this story, so I ended up re-reading it... And I am so glad that I did! Wow, I honestly can't remember the last five chapters... dunno if I never read 'em or what, but this story is amazing! Gah, and WHAT! a cliffhanger! Certainly can't wait for an update, ahahaha, thank you so much for writing this awesome story! :) |
| Horst Wessel 2008-05-11 ch 19, anon. | abuseI liked the beginning, but I have to get off here. This has degenerated into incomprehensibility. |
| sweet-apple-pie 2008-05-03 ch 20, | abuseWow. Interesting prophecy. But confusing as hell :) I really like your story, especially your charactarization of Sirius. I've never been much of a fan of his, at least in the series, but I like how you've actually given him a personality besides "sulky" and "rash." Also, can't wait to find out more about the McAlpin twins and the prophecy! And I'm not one for superpower!Harry, but it'll be nice to see him in action, which you'll probably write in the next chapter... Anyway, I'm aware that you said not to bother with reviews, but I just had to tell you how fun it was to read this story. Keep up the great job! |
| wolfawaken 2008-04-27 ch 20, | abuseI do enjoy each chapters I had read. 10 gallons to you |
| little mimi 2008-04-22 ch 20, | abuseBrilliant chapter! It had a bit of eveything and we finally found out the truth. I can't wait for the next update Mimi |
| doralinda 2008-04-21 ch 20, | abuseI adore this fic! Every new chapter is like a gift--a surprise gift, the best kind. And no, I did not see it coming that C and C are Sirius' (unknown and) long-lost kids! That is a fabulous twist. The story, the characters, the dialogue--are all so rich and satisfying, they almost hold me over between chaps! |
| Heksie 2008-04-21 ch 20, | abusegreat updates - very intens cliffhanger - post soon. |
| re-bar 2008-04-21 ch 20, | abuseoh my! i'm so glad there's a new chapter! i really liked the bits with james and sirius. i liked all of it. except the cliffhangery bit.. i do hope harry doesn't get into too much trouble |