That was pretty good! As far as I could tell, no one was out of character. Hehehe, Curious Heart Wolf reminds me of my brother...I noticed a few typos, but nothing to get bent out of shape about. If this was your first fanfic, it's pretty impressive. Keep up the good work, and keep writing!

"and satisfaction brought it back." sry it's a habit. in case you don't know that's the 2nd part to the curiosity killed the cat remark. anyway, as i stop rambling on, moving on to the important stuff. good job on the story. i always love reading about wolf cousins. look forward to reading your next piece.