Reviews for Hole in the World

Reviews For: Hole in the World

womanintobyscoat 2006-08-10 ch 1,	abuseLove your stories! Shame it's the end :-(
Metroidvania 2006-06-07 ch 1,	abuseThought it would be kind of rude if I asked a favor without reviewing... Brilliant!! I like the thought of a pre-season relationship, and both the angst and eventual happiness was presented very well. Cath's possible jealousy/inferiority, and Sofia's heartbreak were both well-written and represented. Keep up the excellent work. Later, MV
icklebitodd 2006-02-26 ch 1,	abusenow here is a ship i hadnt even comsidered but seems very fitting and almost purpose made from this story. i could see myself becoming a right old cath/sofia shipper. loved it
Little Miss Sorrow 2006-02-18 ch 1,	abuseWow, so that's the reason they don't like each other. Very believeble. I love this one.
2005-11-26 ch 1, anon.	abuseYour pronoun use is fine but your tenses are all over the place -- try to pick either past or present and stick to it. Also, breath (the noun) has no e on the end, and there are a couple of places where you've used a subject in the plural and the verb in the singular ('her hands reaches' or whatever). Other than that, though, I like it -- seriously, I do.
Tazzer 2005-11-16 ch 1,	abuseNice going AU. You came up with a great reason behind the chilly interactions between these two. The whole sterotypical catty women thing is getting old on this show, so much thanks for taking us down a different road. Keep up the great work girl.
MobiusVarient 2005-11-13 ch 1,	abuseAwesome story, this is the first time that I've seen this pairing. I thought that you did a wonderful job with it; the story flowed nicely, and the pronoun usage was pretty clear. Great job :o)
Tarzje 2005-11-12 ch 1,	abuseLove it! I always found Cath should be with Sara, but I can see a ship here :D
Aggie1013 2005-11-09 ch 1,	abuseLove it! I really liked the fact that Cath and Sofia actually knew each other before and had a relationship. And your pronoun use was fine, I could get everything! :-) But I know what you mean about writing about two females! LOL Great work! You ought to write another one!
forensicsgirl 2005-11-08 ch 1,	abusefans self very, very nice... I'm off to take a cold shower...
varsha 2005-11-05 ch 1, anon.	abusethis was an amazing fic , i will admit that i cant put Cath with anyone besides Sara and maybe just maybe see a glimpse of SaraSophia but this fic made me see differently, i can really see a cathsophia ship forming.
Jenuine 2005-11-04 ch 1,	abusethat is one awesome story. even though when i do read slashes i tend to stick to sara/cath, its nice to see someone give sofia a chance with some one. lovin it.
chawkchic 2005-10-28 ch 1,	abuseI just had to check it out even though I am die hard Cath/Sara. You did a damn good job and even had me getting into Sofia/Cath a bit. :)

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