Wow! Sad ending, but it's a really good story!

By the Force! Poor Luke... Your story is good like hell. Poor Threepio. "Ben" is so evil...

But - was Emperor mere spoiled brat from gang of bullies, destroying things, kicking girls etc. etc.?

Hmm, maybe "Ben" challenged his "father"...

And what's happened? Palpatine's clone in Mara's womb or something other?

Great ,thriiling story, but I prefer REAL Emperor...

/sorry for my mistakes and no-perfect English/

:O Holy #$#%$ ##$.

No... no... no!

*hesitantly* It was good, though. ;)

This...oh, I should be so bloody angry with you! Doing that to Luke...EVIL! Although...you did portray Mara as a beeyatch...which scores you two points in your favor...

But this is well-written, and progresses in a fine linear fashion, yet you can never say for sure what the ending is going to become. And it certainly makes you more suspicious of your loved ones...never know what evil they're plotting over the toast.

Great work, Great One.

THAT WAS SO FRIGGIN' FREAKY!

funny tho.

ha ha, Luke!

MWAHAHAHAHAHA!

That was really, really creepy. I am stunned into silence...Please write more on this!

May the Force be with you,

JediWeasley

wow! Great. And creepy.

Gah! That was so crepy! *shivers*

Wonderful Halloween fic! Good job!

-BlueSaber

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o_o;

That was... really creepy. Wow.

'For all you L/M fans?' Ha... - weakly -

:( - cuddles Luke - Poor baby.

Good job -

- ala

Cre...py...

NO... no! luke CANNOT get hurt! he didnt right? tell me he didnt. {gasps}

Always knew Mara was still Palpie's slave

Nicely done