Over all a good storyline and plot, I feel that the last few chapters were lacking detail and were a little rushed through. If this story were to be re-wrote with more detail and the main characters changed so as to not plagiarize the Disney corp. this would make for a wonderful book. Also one last bit of advise, watch wording in dialect... there are a few places where modern phrases slipped through. you also need to decide between the spelling of "love" and "luv" going back and forth does not seem to work as well. All in all a great read. I think we can expect great things from you. Good luck in the future and I hope my advise helps, hopefully we will see this published one day.

loved this story!

liked it a lot!

Yep, we all hated u soon enough. Why Jack? *breaks down sobbing miserably* I love all of your PotC stories! They are the top of my list! I'm surprised u don't have more reviews. Loved the story until the end. *breaks down sobbing again* I love Blackbird. She is my 2nd fav character (my first obviously being Jack) She just makes the story so much better for me. Please consider making a new PotC series! I don't want u to stop now!

Okay, so I just found this story today, and realized by your pen name and the actual content that I had read this on the He's a Pirate site. I really enjoyed it, (all three parts) but thought that I would never be able to tell you. But lo and behold, here it is! This story was fabulously done, and there were so many funny parts I couldn't possibly name them. Except for the last chapter, where Jack dies. I almost cried. Which was sad, but it's great that you can trigger stuff like that. This is a very long review. Wow. Okay, so just so ya know, I liked all of them.

Chicaga

Wow! That was a great story. Sorry for jack.

mypiratejack

oh no he died
the famous man of my dreams
haha
anyway it was a great story!
i hope you do something, like another story about blackbird and the spirit of jack sparrow on the ship of the black pearl
kyou know like blackbird being the captian and in certain situations hearing jacks voice still with her and asking him for advice with certain situations
well that would be my idea
anyway GREAT STORY
hope you start another set of stories about that

mypiratejack

aww her father consented
how cute
and jack loves his RUM!
i would to
hehe

mypiratejack

i love it
that little medicine woman gave him no choice!haha
and blackbird with the advise
she left her hanging

mypiratejack

aww
his little girl
i hope they can reach kelumar

mypiratejack

thank god for those two or marie would be dead
and now will is hurt
hopefully it isn't that serious
blackbird and jack help him!

mypiratejack

so he half made up with juan
interesting hopefully they will get to know eachother more through something
and the cheif is trusting them
cool

mypiratejack

so there are people on the island
and now marie and will are not talking to each other
oh no and jack is being targeted

mypiratejack

man she is a good pirate
already knows that her father is watching her
he is so pretective
and blackbird did see them
i knew it
haha

mypiratejack

so will now knows
when is he going to tell blackbird
well she already kind of knows but what about his son?
and i wonder what will await them at the island