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| Moonchild10 2006-06-07 ch 4, | abuseAmazing. That's about all I can say. This was expertly written. I've read a lot of slash fics where it seems so awkward, but yours wasn't. It was smoothly and believably executed. I enjoyed your twist on things, also, since I admit to hating the name Dick too. Your characterization of Robin was nice, too. His 'relationship' with Slade was presented very well, and his getting out of it was a nice, smooth transition rather than a choppy one. Well, I'm sure you've had enough of my rambling, so I'll leave you with that ^_^ Loved the story. It's definately going in my favorites. I thoroughly enjoyed this one. |
| chittychittybangbang16 2006-03-05 ch 4, | abusedude "your love is a drug" is one of my favorite songs by my favorite band puffy amiyumi! |
| Werewolf DM 2006-01-23 ch 4, | abuseHello! I love your story! About the Dick/Tim thing, on the documentary on one of the DVD the producers actually say that Tim Drake is the Titans' Robin. :) |
| JazzyKnickers 2005-11-10 ch 4, | abuseJust a quick note: In "How Long Is Forever?" the episode where Starfire travels to the future, she meets Nightwing. Only Dick Grayson turned into Nightwing, and so he is most certainly Titans Robin, especially as he also...has the past of Dick Grayson. Hehe...just saying though. I understand about the name and all. S'pose you could've called him Richard instead... I love how you really make it seem like Slade is a drug to Robin. It's shown like he's really going through rehab and keeps breaking down and so on. Loved Beast Boy's toel in this, being all helpful and wise! Not many people see him like that. The link you made between Slade and Terra was awesome. I don't think I've ever seen anyone think of it in that way. |
| dlsky 2005-10-26 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting twist on the take of abilities and skills. Robin using them to his own lieing means, very intersting. I liked your inner thoughts, your revelations to himself about what guilt he was feeling, about how he had changed from the begining to the now. Beast Boy's charcter was well presented too. His eyes. I could feel the hate, feel the betrail, the accusation and the numbing stare; glaring at Robin, and at his mind racing with unspoken questions. I look forward to reading more, dlsky |