HAHAHAHHAHAHAAHA THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE EVER READ!
-Bittersweetx(her sister actually :P)

That was so cute! I loved this story! Poor Dawn! I can imagine her reacting this way. She's make a good Bhuddist, Jain, or Monk. Aw! :D

Hehe, Spotty the lady bug. Because it's funny, we'll let it pass but you DO realise that a 16 yr old Dawn would still not be THAT affected if she killed a ladybug by mistake. That kind of sensitivity is more Mary Anne's thing. Anyway, cute fic and it had me smiling nicely and broadly. It's definitely better than most the fics I've read on this board. (:

i am a total dawn fan cuz shes my favorite in the BSC. i am not mad but i am like, "what the hell?" you did a good job in surprising me!! dawn killed someone and i was like, "maybe i read that wrong.."!! i am not mad i am just...so surprised. you know how to make me surprised. i guess you surprise others too...but i was like, "i, dawn schafer, age sixteen am a murderer." i read it again. i tried to blink my eyes and say, "maybe its manager or messenger or maker or member or... i was like, "omg i think this dude really did say murderer!" ok i know im over-reacting but im just so surprised...xD

Awhh, poor Dawn thinks she's a murderer. Though I feel bad too if I step on a ladybug or kill a beetle.

Very cute and funny!

Sunny,
OMG
Great story haha
WOW. lol at first it was a little
creepy, then funny in the end. i like how
you set that up haha.:)

Liz

omgosh this is great. i was really concerned over the whole thing thinking it was this great drama and then when it got to carol & her dad's reaction i was like, wait, what?
beautiful ending. i loved it.
AL

LoL. I'm not sure she would have seen the ladybug from her driver's seat, but funny anyway. I liked how you added the what he was at the end. How suspense works out!
a.N

Dawn killed a...ladybug.

Well, this would be the kind of thing you'd think she'd do. At first I thought that she had run over a human boy!

-Crunchy

Hi! I actually read this a long time ago, but I came across it again and realized that I never reviewed. omg..I love this! It was so funny when I first read it and it's funny now that I read it again! It's just...hilarious! Well done!

OMG lol that's so funny. When she admitted to being a murderer I first thought she ate meat or something that had to be murdered for her to enjoy. It's funny that she'd mourn over a ladybug but that's typical dawn.

I loved it!

lol! I LOVE it!

Haha, that was GREAT! I really thought she killed a little kid there for a while! Great job!

That's funny! You build up to it, say Dawn's a murderer, and then tell us Spotty's a ladybug! You have a great imagination.