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| Kaye 2006-01-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey, I really like that subtext idea, excellent story :) and now, with "Daddy's Little Girl" just aired, there should be a sequel, oh please, come on *begging* |
| Quill-32 2005-10-31 ch 1,  | abuse"until that particular section of the ocean map could have ‘Here Be Monsters’ erased from it, and ‘Nice Place for a House Boat’ written instead." Marvelous! |
| untapdtreasure81 2005-10-30 ch 1, | abusevery good and very real explanation for what could have been going in the brains of our favorite geeks. looking forward to more of this from you Sassy |
| HarrysLover 2005-10-30 ch 1, | abuseI thought this was wonderfully written and the imagery and metaphor was really unique, well chosen and humorous in a very "CSI" way(If that makes sense). |
| SMKLegacy 2005-10-28 ch 1, | abuseLoved it! Right in character and wonderfully believable from beginning to end. |
| csipal 2005-10-28 ch 1, | abuseOkay, that was awesome. Just awesome. I loved how you were able to turn speculation into story - and a believable one at that! |
| And Also With You 2005-10-27 ch 1, | abuseHere's what I think. I think you should write a story like this after every Grissom and Sara scene. It was just too entertaining. I loved your take on this. You can be the official Grissom translator from now on. :D |
| Nyx Raisa 2005-10-27 ch 1, | abuseomg loved it. adorable. i do not want to jump up and down on your face. :-) |
| Joan Powers 2005-10-27 ch 1, | abuseThat line has been bothering me. I couldn't figure out a way to put a positive GSR spin on it. I like your premise that he's scared and he has to go slowly. That makes sense to me. Nice job. Joan |
| Lindsay 2005-10-27 ch 1, anon. | abusethis was so clever! I read somewhere that some people thought that because of that one comment "Or maybe she was suffocating and he couldn't breathe" that grissom and sara were already dating. I didn't really agree because it didnt make sense but after reading this I could actually picture it, although I still don't think they are, but regardless it was a very smart fic. I'm down in Miami with no power and a labtop thats slowly dying so thanks for writing and keeping me entertained! |
| hazelmom 2005-10-27 ch 1, | abuseGlad to see you back, Morgan. And subtext it is. A very interesting and subtle look at what could be happening behind the dialogue. sheila |
| moyawyvern 2005-10-27 ch 1, | abuseI am so glad to see you back. Great story. I loved the whole "Here be Monsters" to the "Nice place for a house boat" line. |
| Emily 2005-10-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseI enjoyed the subtext. I like your take on that scene and throughly enjoyed the paragraph of Grissom 'treading water' How true. Very well done. |
| ashiya 2005-10-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou're back! Oh I missed your stories. I squeed when I saw your Author Alert in my inbox. *grin* And I love this. I want to squish-huggle it in my sleep. Stay awhile before you go again, hmm? :) |
| KleeNut214 2005-10-27 ch 1, | abuseI so missed your writing. Stay, please! |