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x.Rei
2007-08-29 . chapter 1
Heh, that was cute. :]
MirrorFade
2007-05-09 . chapter 1
Hehe, very funny, and very realistic. I can see it happening in very vivid detail.
menolly1019
2007-02-24 . chapter 1
This is so short, but it's surprisingly good. With only a few words it describes the idiotic rivalry between boys and the annoyingness of being sick. I feel this definitely deserves to be a favorite, just because it is such a good idea and it was written well. Happy Writing.
the grey mage
2006-08-16 . chapter 1
oh snap!

good job with the group dynamic and the one up of a girl to kakashi.
MSkyDragons
2006-07-30 . chapter 1
Brought a smile to my face.
That is so like them.
:)
HehHeh
smile eternal
2006-04-23 . chapter 1
8.5, very funny!
Katterree Fengari
2006-01-03 . chapter 1
hehe...amusing
Uozumi
2005-11-23 . chapter 1
That was brilliant. XD I can so see this happening too!

~ Uozumi
trufflesque
2005-11-02 . chapter 1
Cute! I had the chicken pox when I was four. And then I passed it to my sister, who was two at the time. Of course, now the joke's on me because she catches colds and things before I do, and then passes them onto me when I need them the least -- like the first week of a new job...
Dark Closure
2005-10-29 . chapter 1
XD

I've had the chicken pox (when I was 14) totally not fun in the slightest. Poor Yondaime. Oh well, good thing they got better. Nice dabble.
KunochiDreamer
2005-10-29 . chapter 1
That's great. :)
MeeLee
2005-10-27 . chapter 1
Hahahaha. Very cute. I love your writing, it's very good.

-MeeLee
Smoking Panda
2005-10-27 . chapter 1
Cute...^-^
Azamiko
2005-10-27 . chapter 1
Haha, I just finished a team yellow flash cold fic^^ from Hey-diddle-diddle...Awesome! I guess this is the time of year that everyone's thinking about getting sick...
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