Reviews for Mr and Mrs Potter

Reviews For: Mr and Mrs Potter - Reviews: Page 1 of 2

riegert8 2008-06-05 ch 3,	abuseI think that this is a great story, I think that it one of the best Harry & Luna pairing story I found so far. It nice that Harry is helping Luna out with her father, too bad that he past away but it good that Luna had Harry to help her out. I was shock that Harry got Luna pregnant, but I could understand that Harry would want to take care of Luna and their unborn child. To me it seem that their relationship has taken off when they got married, you could understand that Harry is worried about Harry that he might had a bad mistake. The sad part of the chapter is when Harry & Luna unborn baby died, but the only good thing that happen is that they realize how much they love and need each other. I did feel bad for Luna that in about a year time she has lost her unborn baby and her father died, it would seem like a bad year expect for being married to Harry. I admit I thought that I already made a review for this story an couple years ago, well I was wrong and I feel it never too late to make a review
bookfaerie 2007-12-24 ch 3,	abuseDamn, that's good! I never imagined Harry and Luna, but this completely changed my mind! It's pretty realistic...the only part I don't like is some of the dialogue, which seems a little bit cheesy. But otherwise, I wholly approve of this.
dennisud 2007-08-01 ch 3,	abuseWow a very dramtic emotional and funny story as well. I can't agree harry or Luna would act as they did here but given the time and age of the characters I'll let this slide. Great story! dennisud
petites sorcieres 2007-07-22 ch 3,	abuseThis was great ^-^Really!
crazylittlewitch 2007-06-16 ch 3,	abuseWhat can I say? PERFECT.
AchillesMonkey 2006-02-26 ch 3,	abuseWow. I loved this story. Very well-written.
Pigeonflu 2006-02-14 ch 3,	abusethat was so powerful. wow, just wow.
PiningOverPadfoot 2006-01-07 ch 3,	abuseFirst of all, I want to say I really liked this. This is the first Harry/Luna story I've ever read, and I'm glad it was the first, because if it had been another one I probably would have sworn them off forever. The relationship seemed so REAL. At first, I didn't really like them not communicating and all, but then I realized that it must have been very awkward for them being married AND expecting a baby, so I accepted it. I didn't really like how everyone was against them, although I suppose it IS realistic. The thing that upset me most about all of that was Mrs. Weasley saying that Harry was breaking her heart, which I didn't really understand; it sounded like she was trying to make him feel guilty about marrying Luna. However, I liked how Fred and George supported them; it seems very likely that they would, if that ever DID happen. The one other thing is how cruel Ginny seemed. I understand that she might be bitter, but she was just so awful to Luna. I just can't see her being that way; I also picture her being friends with Harry if they don't ever get back together, not hating him. I loved how you wrote Dudley here. I'm glad you let him and Harry be civil to each other, and him be kind to Luna, as well. I think the scenes with Petunia and when Harry first admitted he loved Luna (in the hospital, when she was hemorrhaging) were my favorites. All in all, this was really good. I'm not saying I'll ever read a Harry/Luna fic again, but it's now a possibility, whereas it wasn't before. Wonderful story!
Stella9876 2005-11-07 ch 3,	abuseLoved it! i love the wau u write! u dedicated time to it and thats very good! hope u'll do another story like that
Kat198 2005-11-01 ch 3,	abuseI have to tell you that this story was beautifully written, and extremely well done. it poignant and nearly made me cry, I actually skipped a class just so i could finish reading it! And believe me i try not to skip :) I just wanted to tell you that this is by far one of my favorite Harry and Luna stories :)
Musings-of-Apathy 2005-10-29 ch 3,	abuseThat was a very good story. My heart wrenched when Luna was dividing her heart with the other man. I am glad that in the end Harry and Luna ended up with a family. I always pictured this to be more important to him than a career or any other thing. I always like stories where he is a good dad or father figure, whether it is his own children or not. I like the image of father Harry. The reactions of Ginny in this fic seemed a little OOC but not too bad. It follows canon in one interpretation where Ginny has seemed to feel entitled to Harry all of these years when she has not initiated the relationship. You got the attitude from the books that it is Harry's fault for not falling for her when he is hers. Thank you for writing this work. Mike.
absolutleyfabulous 2005-10-28 ch 3,	abuseWOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW! That story was so good. I love love love the long chapters. They made me get into the story so much more then other stories and I loved it. the ending is so sweet. I wish it would go on to other chapters...This is going on my favs because its awsome. You wrote it beautifully and I think you portarayed everyone perfect.
Szihuoko 2005-10-28 ch 3,	abuseIt's a very good story, i like the way you try to weave the emotions into it. The way Ginny acted was quite fabulously done as well.
Convicted-of-the-Saucy 2005-10-28 ch 2,	abuseinterestig and well written story! please continue
AzureSky123 2005-10-27 ch 2,	abusenice job.

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