 Ri-Ri Ray 2007-12-11 . chapter 1well...
that was odd... |
 Joe 2007-09-14 . chapter 1 "*_*"... |
 d 2006-03-15 . chapter 1 THAT was pretty starge and short but good |
 Igiveup 2005-12-17 . chapter 1Aw! How cute! |
 Ardelis Mercy 2005-11-01 . chapter 1Haha! That was a cute story and I like how you left the end kind of open-ended. Nice writing for a short one-shot. I liked it. :) |
 Moon in Pisces 2005-10-30 . chapter 1*raises eyebrow*
interesante... |
 Waffles the parapledgic monkey 2005-10-27 . chapter 1 Short, yet strangly satisfying. |