good story; It's good that there are stories without any plot.
a diffrent flow in the worls of fanfics xD

this chapter was very very sweet. i love how their relationship is progressing. i also found interesting that you said he couldnt cry through his burnt eye.

lol do people seriously have the nerve to ask you to read their stories? (or worse, recommend them)>?! thats really far out...

the best part was the crocodile hunter spoof. its almost 2am i should be sleeping but this is too good. i also love your other stories. i think... i know i read some but i cant remember anymore... anyway, i'll try to read them soon.

btw, thats so wonderful that youre from taiwan and english is your second language. it is my second language also, as i am from the caribbean.

your story is light, refreshing and hilarious in its own simplicity. very good.

how adorable.

i like this one.
keep it up~

Hahahah, so funny! please do another chapter, i cant wait until you do!

Update soon. Now. Immediately.

O.O

~Kit

-adds self to list of People Who Wouldn't Mind Beyond Stuck on a Deserted Island With Said Certain Firebender-

-snicker snicker-

This should TOTALLY be an episode. I can see it happening so clearly.

God! Would you UPDATE already

xD Sarcasm is

So... been more than a year and you haven't updated this story... got a good reason?

Well, here's my review. It's been forever since I read any decent story besides my own or my cousins, this one is pretty good and you sound like a pretty popular writer. though I must say... you've got a SERIOUS issue with cussing my friend. I suggest you get that fixed. ;P

So there's still some stuff I'm confused about, like what happened to the pirates and how they got on the island in the first place... all in all, i would like to read an ending. :)

haha! clams actually taste better raw than cooked... maybe that's just my Asian side talking though;P liking the story!

I though coconuts were fill ed with coconut water... and coconut milk was made by melting the flesh?

Oh well whatever, this story is good. Someone talked about you being such a great writer and i wanted to check your stories out. Cool. :)