There's a bit of an age difference, but I can see it. Love Jayne's POV.

*Dies* I can so hear him (GUH that voice) saying that too. Yeah, I'll be in my bunk...

Haha, that was great! I can see that being Jayne's response somehow...

That's hysterical. I love the idea that the thing that attracts him to her is her ability to kick butt. Totally believable. Nice piece.

...lol

Very nice. I can picture it too.

that was real shiny!

*grins*

A very, very Jayne thing to say. Trust Jayne to get turned on by River when she's all covered in blood...LOL

ha thats so just perfect he totally thougt that

That was shiny. I could totally see Jayne getting all turned on by a woman that could kick his butt and a room full of reavers.
That last line actually made me chuckle out loud and my husband says I only do that while I find something REALLY funny.
Keep up the good work. Excellent Jayne voice.

... i hope simon didn't hear that... lol.

Short, but really compelling. It's totally realistic! (and I hope secretly true)

haha... that is so what jayne would be thinking. great job!

Aha, Adorable!

I loved it, very nice Jayne voice...thanks for writing.

Jade C.