|Reviews for Destroyed|
| Fiones 10/28/05 . chapter 3
Damn woman, how do you update so fast?
Anyway, thanks for the reassurance! I'm glad to know that things will clear up, soon probably if you continue to update at this speed.
This chapter was very sexy, if I do say so myself! The Collins/Angel fight was very hot, in an oddly disturbing way. I could just imagine Collins having mental images of him and Angel in bed together during the fight. And may I just say that Angel kicks ass. End of story.
Heehee, I feel bad for Julia. Seriously, that must be a lot to have dropped on her so suddenly.
Hmm...the next chapter sounds intriging. Sex scenes, between who I wonder? And a criminal act that forces Julia to return to MIT...I wonder what that'll be.
Anyway, update soon since this story is awesome!
P.S: I forgot to mention but I LOVED your other story 'Seasons of Love, Season of Pain'. It was short but truly a masterpiece! Its nice to see Collins and Angel fight every now and then because most writers have this image of them as the 'perfect couple that never fights or has any problem and what not' and that is not true. Thanks for being a breath of fresh air! -breaths-
| Lania 10/28/05 . chapter 2
Okay. Good story, but just so you know, you cannot study Arts at MIT (I AM an MIT student.) But other than that, good job and keep going!
| Fiones 10/28/05 . chapter 2
Hmm..very nice story so far! You've really done a good job on capturing Angel's darker side, a side most stories don't go into! And Collins seems oddly in character.
The only problem with it, in my opinion, is Julia. She seems to be a little, too perfect, you know? Not in the mary-sue way but in the perfect student type of way. Overall she really is an okay character but I find it hard to believe that she is the type of person Mark would fall for, assuming that is indeed where you are headed.
All in all, it's very good! Very original, but it does need a tad bit of touching up, especially Mark. And please don't take this as a flame/bash, since I really don't mean it that way. Continue, please and soon!
| Phoenix-Satori10 10/28/05 . chapter 2
Aw! Sparks flying between Mark and Julia... and I don't mean the faulty camera :) Awesome chapter here, my friend. I can't wait to read the next one to find out what happens when Collins finally emerges from the bathroom. Please, please, PLEASE continue this! As always, your writing has me hooked!
| kelsey 10/27/05 . chapter 1
Thanks for writing about my favorite couple! There is a serious lack of Collins/Angel fiction available and I'd like to see you continue your story. Angel’s condition is making me sad, but I'm interested in seeing more of his relationship (if you can call it that) with Collins unfold.
Poor Angel, crying over spilt milk! Oh, now I’m depressed. Update soon, please!
| Phoenix-Satori10 10/27/05 . chapter 1
Wow! Your writing style in this piece is very cool. The images you brought to mind with the part about Angel are still lingering in my head. I'm somewhat glad that Tom has someone he can talk to, even though he hurt Angel. I can't wait to read more of this so you'd better continue it :) lol.