luv it loads it sounds great and it would do great if u could get it done
allmost as good as the original but not der yet

Exciting! I luv the Supernaturalist! Methinks Cosmo is almost as cool as Artemis. (except he's probably a lot uglier than Artemis 'cause of that fake forehead Ditto gave him)

I like it.

So far this story is fantastic! Everyone is in Character, the humor blends in perfectly with the tension, and the crossover of the two books was a great idea! For your prologue though, you need to edit and spellcheck, cuz there were more then a few errors. I don't think the chapters were to short, i mean, prologues are supposed to be short. oh, btw, is this set before or after everything thathappens in The Supernaturalist? keep going plz, i love it!

heh. I was planning on writing a crossover... oh well! That was awesome and I hope you update soon.

PS: Try to make your chapters longer but everything else is great.

Again, it's me. I REALLY LOVe your stories even if this one isn't finished yet. Hope you update soon. Nice plot. You'll be a good writer someday. * Salutes to Matthew Wall*

oh, please more soon! i really like this fic! x.x

update^^:p

Awsome Ive read both^^:padd u to fave^^:p

The chapter was extremely short and you didn't give enough information to just make one chapter. Oh, and sorry it's not that I don't want to use my member name it's just my father is on this big project and I can't go on his computer. So I'm Just stuck with my Mom's Lap top. Okay enough with my blabbering and back to my reveiw I think it's good for a first chapter But make the next chapter longer please! CHOW ALL!

Sweet Candy

(AKA WELOVECHOCLATE)