I loved it, you can really do some good sex scene. That scene wasn't just good because how you described it but because you took it to a whole new level not only about sex but about what they were feeling for each other and how they needed each other, it was about love. I wish you would have made this a story and not just one chapter. I wish you would have wrote about what Kendall and Zach do after they got done making love and if they end up having a real marriage and if they admit to one another that they are in love with each other.

Wonderful story and the best I've read so far. You use imagery very well and I felt like I was there. Thank you for writing this and I hope to read more of your work soon!

who! hot, hot, hot! bravo!

hey... are you ever gonna do another jr/babe piece? pwese?

WOW

You HAVE to continue this. Also can you please apply for the head writing position for AMC immediately, those writers have NOTHING on you

Wonderful, Em! Simply wonderful. Hot and sexy too!! You should do another lol doesn't have to be another chapter, another steamy one shot will do :).

Rachel

This story was beautiful. In light of what has been happening on the show, it was very much needed. Thank you so much for this.

Wow! That was great! Could you please write this for the show? Please Pretty please? Please don't tell me this is a one-shot?!!?!

I loved the Zach comment about how she made him bleed every time she showed she cared. Sounds like a Zach comment to me!