I'm glad you posted this ending. It seems that lots of really good books I've read are excellent right fromthe start, all the way through the middle, then right at the end they fall short.

This ending can demonstrate that really good books can have a really good ending too.

Thanks,

Pete

Very original, and very well written.

Just one nitpick - I think you missed one part when you were editing the story for H/G; at one point it still says "Harmony" instead of "Jenny:"

"They lay there quietly for a while. Harmony spoke softly. 'When do think it will be time to tell him the truth?'"

That was real cute! :) I really liked it! lol Earnest White! lol

*giggles* I like that! Except you accidentally called 'Jenny' 'Harmony' once. I never would have thought of something like that! Excellent job!

cool!

WICKED! That was simply spiffing! You are AMAZING! I'm goign back to your profile to find more of your fics to read!

HAHAha i get it!

I like your story, it has the same name as one you wrote but I misspelled the tittle. It reads Bedtime Sories. I like the Henery and Jenny point of veiw though.

Ooh, I like this! Its so strange that it's funny!

very well written! Though i had to actually think for a bit to figure out who earnest white was. (Making me think when i'm on summer vacation...that's a crime!) but what's the dmle? could you review one of my stories and tell me? (COUGHCOUGHplugCOUGHCOUGH) :C) Love, Dragonessa Smith

Ha! That's great!

Kewl! That was a kewl twist! I've never read anything like it, (an I've read A TON), that was great! Keep writing! Are you the Plot Twist King/Queen?

Oh, I loved that! It was sooo cute!

That was really cute...I especially like the Earnest White part, *lol*

Lol! That's really good! Loved it!