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| KittyCatGrl 2005-12-29 ch 1,  | abuseThat was so sad, but it was really good.Plz keep going |
| RavynOwl 2005-12-20 ch 4, | abuseI'm having a hard time thinking that after all that, Andros would go all the way with Zhane all a once. I'd think he'd need to ease into it, so to speak. Although the Ranger and friendship bonds they share may make up for that. Still, fears aren't rational. hm |
| Darkyami7 2005-12-20 ch 4, | abuseAww! That is sappy! But...you know how I love the sappy crap...aww...I'd say that they should hug...but that's already happened...*cough, cough* |
| Chylea3784 2005-12-20 ch 4, | abusegood story - I like how you ended it. Maybe a little sappy, but sweet. I like how time had passed before the trust had built up enough for Andros to share his secret. not too little and not too much. Well done! |
| kaela 2005-12-13 ch 3, anon. | abusegreat chapter! poor andros, though. do we find out more of what happened to him? please? update soon! |
| Darkyami7 2005-12-09 ch 3, | abuseOh! Poor Andros! But...Zhane'll make him feel better...YOU'RE BACK! Great chapter, and update soon!...how cliched...::shrugs:: |
| RavynOwl 2005-12-07 ch 3, | abuseHere's your review, dammit. Are we going to find out more of what happened to Andros? |
| Chylea3784 2005-12-07 ch 3, | abuseExcellently written! Keep up the good work! |
| Mander08 2005-12-07 ch 3, | abuseAH THAT WAS GOOD! I love it! I'm so glad your back. YAY YAY YAY! cant wait for you to write more. See you later |
| Mae 2005-11-11 ch 2, anon. | abuseDamnit I wanna know what happens next! ::WHINES LIKE THREE YEAR OLD EVEN THOUGH I'M EIGHTEEN:: |
| darkyami7 2005-11-09 ch 2, anon. | abuseToo lazy to log in...I'M REVIEWING, DAMMIT! LMFAO. Yep, good chapter...I bet that I can guess what happens next *snicker* |
| Mander08 2005-11-09 ch 2, | abuseAWESOME... I CANT BELIEVE YOU STOPPED THERE... YOUR EVIL... that was great i had the picture of Zhane without a shirt on the whole time... and I would say that about Andros to but he's yours. Can't wait till you write more -me |
| Chylea3784 2005-11-08 ch 2, | abuseWell done! Maybe you could have had the other rangers leave a little more gradually and/or subtlely. It almost had the feeling like they were running from the plague. I have to admit, however, that it sped the story up neatly. I look forward to your next chapter. |
| Chylea3784 2005-11-08 ch 1, | abuseplease continue this story. i'm really curious how it will go! |
| ---- 2005-11-04 ch 1, anon. | abusenice but just update |