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| PLF94 2007-08-16 ch 6,  | abusethat was great |
| The Mad shoe1 2006-04-18 ch 6, | abuseExtremly well written fic, and the story was pure gold =) |
| Gravity Control 2006-04-01 ch 6, | abuseWow. Simply...wow. "– and yet she just blows him off and treats him as if he’s some kind of lower life form, suitable only for squashing." That part made me laugh. ^.^ GREAT STORY! I'd edit the mild cussing...BUT STILL GREAT! I, Gravity Control, hereby honor you with muffins. ^_^ |
| Lightspeed-4 2006-02-07 ch 6, | abuseLove the story and I absoloutly love soccer and play forward(striker, if you haven't already known that) and center defense. On rare occasions I'll play sweeper or mid-fielder. Never goalie. Uh-Uh. Never happening. Loved the story and I'm adding it to my favorites! Great Work! |
| Long lost sorrow 2005-12-09 ch 6, | abuseThis was wicked sweet! All right...That didn't come out right. Let me try again. THAT STORY ROCKED MY SOCKS! |
| Rei Ronin 2005-12-08 ch 1, | abuseThis review is for the entire story...just to make that clear. Shall we say...excellent? It's not really the perfect word for describing this, but oh well, it'll do until another comes along. Superb...that's it. I am quite impressed with your writing, as well as your ability to Americanize your writing. There were a few slang terms that I had to think about a bit...I'd never heard 'chav' before, but I honestly think it gives your writing some real character. Speaking of character...or rather characters, I'd say you got the kids down very nicely. Things seemed a bit rushed for their personality types when it came to their bonding, but you wrote a medium-length story, and that's inevitable especially considering that the sense of time's passage was a tad bit loose. Nothing serious, but I almost felt like this was three days worth of events. In any case, an excellent piece of writing. I hope to see more from you in the very near future. |
| Da Bop 2005-12-05 ch 6, anon. | abuseWow. Your story is amazing. I enjoy origion stories, but hate when it's rushed. You did the exact opposite of rushing. Bravo!! |
| Tsukky 2005-12-03 ch 5, | abuseI like your story. I hope to hear more, and more, and moremoremoremoremore Code Lyoko stories from ya. -T.M. |
| Tsukky 2005-12-02 ch 6, | abuseI like it x3 |
| Werwek 2005-11-15 ch 3, | abuseWow...this was an amazing story; the characters were awesome; you really gave Ulrich the feel of a teenage boy, slightly ansgty over soon to be meaningless things. This really gave a much needed individual insight on each character, specially since their life before Lyoko is nothing but speculation. The kiss scene was quite good, though my favorit has have been the last chapter and Jeremie's try at understanding Football (I'm mexican, we call soccer football too). You really are a great aouthor with a great sense of character development and plot... Congratulations on writting this grand fiction, keep on going strong PS saw one gramamtical mistake...somewhere... |
| The Only Innocent Writer He... 2005-11-15 ch 6, | abuseMake a another addition to tis FanFic! PLEASE! |
| RoDrInCuBuS 2005-11-15 ch 2, | abuseNice chapter!! I enjoy your story... very interesting that it reminds me of Garage Kids... |
| Parslie 2005-11-14 ch 6, | abusePoor James! Lol, I love James's in general. I liked your story. It was alright. ^-^ |
| Yay 2005-11-11 ch 6, anon. | abuseHooray! LOve the pairing! Where's Odd? |
| Otritzi 2005-11-10 ch 6, | abuseNice fic. I like the group's personailites. I still think it could have used Odd though. |