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tanith-4486
2009-12-02 . chapter 1
iinteresting. continue?
Fedski
2009-11-15 . chapter 1
ooh its so good! please tell me you plan on updating this soon! it sounds so interesting! i love the idea!!
great job and please post more soon!
Natsuko Nishi
2006-09-26 . chapter 1
This story is so kawaii. I love it. Will you have Usagi attend Hogwarts and if so, will she and Harry date? If not, Will you have them become friends when he sees her in the Forbidden Forest so many times? What about Mamoru? Will he grow up knowing everthing about his past from the Silver Millenium? What about a new enemy that wants to take Mamoru's Densetsu no Kinzuishou? What about the Bone Eater's Well, if it still works then maybe you could have him visit the Higurashi's. That could be kind of cool.
Shahrezad1
2006-06-07 . chapter 1
Oh, wow. Now this has got my attention, like few other crossovers.

I know that in your bio you said that you and your partner, Jikkan, separated as a writing duo. However, since this has only the first chapter posted, and as such the both of you were only slightly entrenched in the story...dare I hope that you continue it, as a single author?

If it's not be be, then I understand. But at the same time, I can't help but hope. This has too much potential to pass up on. I'll be watching out for any updates, should there be any.

Eternally your reviewer,
Sherry
divad relffehs
2006-01-08 . chapter 1
this is good i'd like to see more
Moon-of-Serenity
2005-12-27 . chapter 1
It is a very interesting portrayal of the sailormoon story. It is very interesting so far and i am eager to read more of it!
Athea
2005-11-13 . chapter 1
Oh this fic started out wonderfully. It has so much potential. I can't wait to find out what will happen next, I hope you will update soon.
NalaravatheRed
2005-10-30 . chapter 1
:D that is unbearably adorable, but I will endure. Please please update soon. I love your works SO much.
elianthos
2005-10-30 . chapter 1
Hi, my beloved duo! *pats Jikkan's - good -hand. What's happened?*

Big yummy cross-over you're plotting. *rubs hand in satisfaction*

I was expecting you'd turn Sesshomaru into a Lunarian. Very suitable.

I must say I'm most interested in your idea of soul-bond (would have you guessed ^_^?). Some elements sounds partly Plato-like to me(in his myths, he stated in the beginning every being was formed of two fused bodies - both of the same gender, or different -. Then the gods split those beings in two. and since then the two halves craved for completion again. So, one soul/one body split in two a and COMPELLED by his own nature to found his /her missing part, life after life) Let's see what consequence this will have on the plot.

Meanwhile, I'm picturing in my mind a very young, chubby Mamo-chan *gushes*.
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I'm nearly finished with my panels *yay!*. I'll start working on your commissions on Wednesday hopefully.

Bye!
YamiPaladinofChaos
2005-10-29 . chapter 1
Huh... had no idea this was already up. Good show, wot wot, though I see you didn't change the scene where Rin finds Mamoru.

Still, quite nice.
Michi P.
2005-10-29 . chapter 1
aw that was so cute! great crossover themes...Inu Yasha, Harry Potter, and Sailor Moon all into one! tis rulez! pls pls pls update soon!
Endy's Girl
2005-10-29 . chapter 1
amazing! absolutely amazing! i have never really had the desire to read a crossover fic before but i've read kakeru(UPDATE!) and i knew i just had to read it since you are such a great author. I loved it! it was perfect! hope you update soon!
mystlady
2005-10-29 . chapter 1
oii... I just love your writing and perfect description. It'd be great if you placed this under Sailor Moon Crossover section. :D You probably get more feedback than here in Sailor Moon section. Long live, Mamoru-san!!
Natsudori Lina
2005-10-28 . chapter 1
*waves cheerily* Hello! I'm back, for I have (lit'rally) teh power! Now, to review this lovely morsel I found waiting for me...

First off... I'm going to say how relieved I am that this is a crossover with Harry Potter and Inuyasha. Next to Sailor Moon, those are my two favorite fandoms. I'm immensely relieved that you didn't go with something like Fruits Basket, which would require research on my part, and I'm a lazy bum, to be sure.

Ah, the whole Silver Millenium scene, where Serenity's gone mad. I'm actually having tears prick at my eyes as I re-read it. Especially as Selenity's worried for her. Mommy-angst gets to me like nothing else.

*reads on* Ah, soul mate explanation. *noddles* Well done.

*reads more and chokes back a sob* Oh lord, it's Gaia and more Mommy-angst...

What idiot would waste a perfectly good sword by leaving it…”

I'd imagine Sesshoumaru would have a thing or two to say about that.

‘If they were still around, I’d make Ah Un eat them…’

*giggles*

Sesshoumaru stared. As always, Rin speculated nervously of what her guardian might be thinking; his impassive gaze never wavered. “Rin,” he said finally. “What is that?” As usual, his voice was level, and contained neither surprise nor contempt.
“‘That’ is a baby, Sesshoumaru-sama,” Rin replied

*giggles madly*

Indignant spluttering from the youkai Lord’s left was heard as the brunette disappeared from sight. “Sesshoumaru-sama!” Jaken, Sesshoumaru’s self-styled retainer, continued to bluster. “It’s a human! You hate humans! Humans shouldn’t –”

*innocently whaps Jaken-baka*

‘That child…’ he thought grimly, his mind slipping into the half-haze of meditation. ‘The boy is a bottomless reservoir of potential. Such power – so pure and clean… and old. He has the smell of the Earth in him, but also the scent of the Moon.’

*_*... pretty...

His first word was when he was eight months of age; he had never attempted to speak until then, much to Rin’s confusion, but when he did, the word was surprisingly coherent.
“Muun,” he said, pointing at the full moon hanging silver in the sky. “Muun,” he repeated, and continued to stare.

*melts*

Mamoru kicked up a ruckus and let out what sounded to be a shriek of pain.

She was alarmed, of course – Mamoru never cried, so there must be something wrong.

Thundering into the gardens where he had been playing, Rin blinked as she saw him laugh at her and wave a rose from a chubby fist.

“The muun,” he enunciated carefully, “is here.”

*blinks* Has Usagi just been born then?

Can't wait for the next, and this was lovely as always! *hugs*

-Lina
Kellybug
2005-10-28 . chapter 1
Hm... making Mamoru, at one point, the son of Sesshoumaru? IT WORKS! They seem to have the same stoicism.
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