That was so funny make more stories i love that storie

This is very very beautiful story, I love JOHN/TEYLA fanfics
Love any story that have them married withe children

Are you kidding..you should keep going..this is fabulous! You must continue to write others...

Aw! Great job!

Very very nice ending and overall, a very good, albeit short story, but each chapter had a purpose and I enjoyed it. You bring a smile to my face, keep writing.

The ending already? *gasp* Very, very sweet: like cotton candy or some Halloween stuff. Loved it all the way through. And keep writing.

~JMW~

Oh, intiugue! Please, I wanna see the wedding! Be quick in posting, quick, I say! hehehe...:-D

Only one? Lol... Still good! Keep it up!

oh! that is SO going on my fav's list

Aw! Squee! Yay, we're almost there!

You can't just quit in the middle of the wedding, that's blasphemy. WRITE MORE!

I have to admit..for some strange reason, I like this chapter the best..the characters seem real and the story flows beautifully...I like the interruptions and I love the Teyla/John moments...Can't wait till you update!

Cute and amusing chapter. Keep writing, it was also longer than most of the others.

Oh well, no harm done. I couldn't figure out why the site was unresponsive, but now we know.

This story is going so well. And I'm not going to influence your decision about a wedding or not -- do what feels right when you get there.