i liked it.
you did a good job of getting into Kurogane's head. i can imagine him reacting exactly like that.

... btw i looked but i can't find the "gullible" on my ceiling

Teehehee, I liked the ending.

^0^ I love those. Especially because I just KNOW Kurogane probably -will- stay behind in the manga/anime, so I read as many happy fics as I can. And I like this one's ending quite a lot ^^

*This* is what you call craptacular? Good grief. Well, *I* call it very, very good and not craptacular at all. I really enjoyed this. ^__^ *claps* Great job!

~Kayla~

Other than being short ( you know I don't like it when you write short ones =_= ) it is realy good, and I can imagine him actually acting like that too...keep it up! =D

Wow, I love fan fics which deploy Kurogane, especially when they're his thoughts and his emotions. Go you! If you can, make more Kurogane-centric fics - there's a big lack of them

Great fic! I loved it! Kurogane was totally in character!

I won't hit you even though I didn't get to beta. It's cute, though. I like the line, "...I still want to know when the hell it became my quest too." I mighta put a comma in between quest and too but you used the right too!! And I am kinda too busy to uh... yeah. look over stuff.
So instead of a thwack you get a pat on the back. :-)
~Auramistealia