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| Nathy1000000 2006-05-01 ch 1, | abuseI've read the three stories tonight and I think they are wonderful. I loved how you portray the change of both brothers. And the ending was very well written and really sad. |
| chattypandagurl 2005-10-30 ch 1, | abuse"'If you walk out that door, don't even think about coming back.' The door slammed in his face." Nice ending line, nice end to your series; I really enjoyed it. Great job! |