I liked it so far.
You should make the chapters longer though
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hurry write more write more write wmore write more~!

you must toy more plz plz plz plz

I love your story i just dont get the last part

Let me guess,Kouga knocked Kagome out?Where the hell is Sesshomaru?Update soon.^_^

good story!! yeah, a confusing in fast parts, both otherwise its cool. im anxious to see who did that to kagome...^_^

hm what hit her??

ohh this sounds hot but wat happened? anyway great story can umake da chapters a lil longger great story update soon

UPDATE PLZ! AND PLEASE PLEASE PLAESE UPDATE SOME OF UR OTHER STORIES TOO!1

a seems a bit way too fast pace - sorry. they just keep jumping from the hotel to the beach, plus there was no airplane to the car to the hotel thing and she didn't really 'admire' the beach or say something describe the surrounding.

it good please update soon.

write more

hehe love heh update soon

This is kinda good. great for a 1st chappie tho. keep going and add more detials