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| AidenB 2007-04-29 ch 1, | abuseAw, why stop here? Very developed character already even in that single chapter. Far better than my start (sorry I'm always comparing myself). I was a HUGE fan of Speed too. Also, I'm way behind on your 'What The Eyes Can't See Story' but I'm catching up! |
| daynaa. 2006-01-13 ch 1, | abuseO! That is intense! She's Horatio's... neice? Brother's daughter, yeah neice haha. I'm slow. Anyways, great start! I like it! |
| randomwriting 2005-11-12 ch 1, | abuseI liked your story, I thought you did a nice job w/ it. I'm in favor of all stories where Speed is still alive. I thought you created an interesting original character & that can be hard to do. Personally, I had a hard time w/ her age, but that's my only complaint. |
| speedfanatic05 2005-10-28 ch 1, | abuseoh my gosh! first I would like to say thank you so much for not killing Speed in this version of Lost Son and if you're taking requests please don't kill him off later, lol. I loved how you interjected Cheryl into the mix and how you made her younger , but intelligent. She really can handle herself around others. And if you don't mind me saying, I think Speed is developing feelings for her. I must know how Cheryl handles being informed about her 'family'. that was a real twist and i had to clap my hand over my mouth to stop from screaming, lol. I enjoyed this emensely, and I hope to see somemore very soon... Great Job!! |