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| Ducky'sgirl4ever 2008-06-28 ch 1,  | abuseA great story. I liked the part where they were dealing with the crazy lady. |
| JoyBean 2006-01-16 ch 1, | abuseA fantastic story! It reminded me a little of that Cary Grant movie 'Arsenic and Old Lace', where the nice old ladies take in strangers only to poison them and bury them in their basement. Your story though was way more horrifying and a delight to read. |
| Mma63 2005-10-28 ch 1, | abuseIt was creepy...a shiver runned trough my spine...WOW. I'm obsessed with your story, I'm going to read it again...Present, past, present again...hard to follow but interesting & intense. The way you wrote it, was amazing! Want to read more...I need more. And what about the new multi chapter fic (with Nick of course) you told us you were working on? Happy Halloween to you, too! |
| nicol-leoraine 2005-10-27 ch 1, | abuseA little confusing first, but creepy enough. I liked it, though I´m from Europe, and we don´t have a Halloween. Trick´O Treat! and good writing in the future. |
| thatTaylorgirl 2005-10-27 ch 1, | abusewow...definitely creepy. i love the interchanging scenes...quick flashes back and forth... nice! |
| rojaji 2005-10-27 ch 1, | abuseyep. you succeeded. that was creepy. and I swear that's the same old lady that lives across the street from me. thanks a bunch. Heh! and Happy Halloween to you too! |
| Susan the Tartan Turtle 2005-10-27 ch 1, | abuseWhen I started reading this I was happy, with my itsy bitsy ** cat lying under my desk snoring away. As I read the end of the story I looked at him and he was staring at me - with an evil gleam in his eye. Good job we are well stocked up on his favourite cat food!! This creeped me out and that it the sign of a good story! Good concept. |