Aw It was great!

It's beautiful, very well worded, and very well written O_o Loved it!

The feeling in this story to me was indescribable and it just got me so mesmerized! _

Great job!

Sayonara,

Tenshi-Battosai

I like this, but it ends so abruptly... will you continue it and elaborate on what changes this revelation makes in Sango and Miroku's relationship?

You write well in the present tense and describe things beautifully.

love it.