Wow, this is an amazing piece of fanfiction. It's well thought out, brilliantly written and has extremely long chapters that don't feel stretched. All in all, I love it and hope you update soon.

Is Malfoy and co going to use the clock to locate Harry later?

Read the whole thing in three days...Holy fuck, this is great.

Keep on trucking man this shits killer.

I know I'm joining the choir here, but you've crafted such an amazing story! We're hooked! Please say this fic is still going strong!

Am I the only one who pictured the Dumbledore standing in front of the gates, holding the Dementors back, waving his sword and yelling "You shall not pass"?

Yes?
Okay...

Great chapter! Keep it up! Just finished reading up to the latest chapter in this story. My teachers will probably be disappointed by my exam results...
I blame you for that.

Bloody brilliant mate. I love your story, it's very well written and obviously well thought out. :) I'll check back periodically for updates, and in the meantime wish you all the luck an unlimited, and consequence free, supply of Felix Felicis could bring.

At the end of chapter 21, you switch the perspective from Harry to a mystery Slytherin. Who is this person plotting against Harry?

So... is this story dead? Coming close to a year with no updates and this story is still good enough that i keep rereading it and still look forward to the next chapter.

Is this the end ? I love this story and want to know what happens ! update , update , update! Please and thank you xx

Really enjoyed this xxx I hope you finish it as I am extremely curious about Ron getting the word this time and whether Harry will admit he used it before xxx

This is a great fanfic, and I've really been enjoying reading it. Only one thing bothers me, though, and that's your comment in the notes of this chapter where you mention that slash shipping essentially creates "an OC with the same name as a canon character and that's it". I _strongly_ disagree with that - it implies that sexual orientation is one of, if not the biggest, trait which makes a person who they are, and that's just not true. It plays a role, sure, but it's an unpredictable role, so you can't look at any one HP character and say "nope, there's no possible way they can be gay, I've never seen them do [gay stereotype]".

To put it another way: just because you never see a character do or say something in canon, doesn't mean it's not canon. Dumbledore is a prime example of this: the books never mention he's gay, but he's still officially gay. Likewise, just because, say, Ron ends up with Hermione doesn't mean he would never hook up with a man - it's entirely possible he's bisexual, but it never came up in the canon because he married the first person he fell for, and that person happened to be a girl. This isn't to say he /has/ to be bisexual - he probably is straight - but "probably" is an important word there, so shipping him with a man would make him no more of an OC than your Snape is an OC because he uses Legilimency on his first-years.

I'll close by saying that I agree with your decision to generally stick with canon ships for this story - makes perfect sense for a story like this - though I'm fully expecting to see Harry make a decision at some point that inadvertently leads to one or more of his friends hooking up with someone they didn't in the original timeline. Can't make things too easy on ickle Harrikins, now can we? ;)

I like this, what you've done with their relationship. I thought him having a 30 year old min might be messed up but you've fixed it up a lot and having his insecurities show through definitely helps. I'm not sure how I feel about them already being in semi-permanent couples at ate 12 and I can see how Harry pushed them towards it and with fate being similar yet slightly different, that they might be tied to their significant other in some way. I just think dating and breakups and all that are integral parts of being a teen. This is quite well written though and for once I enjoy seeing a better side of Ron Ginny and Molly that isn't as prevelant in Fanon.

I absolutely love your story. Please update! :D

This was amazing, but why hasn't it been updated since 2010?

K the bit with Ginny was definitely kinda creepy since he has the mind of a 30 year old...but I like that you already began fleshing out her character and managed a reasonable way for her to be semi-included in his 1st her. Hope the writing continues to be so good.