 AnnabethChase5450 2009-11-23 . chapter 37This is an AWESOME story! Why haven't you updated for over a year?! AH! Please update this story, for your devoted readers? Pretty please? |
 glassdragon2 2009-11-22 . chapter 17Awesome chapter! I loved Remus's letter. Please continue this story! There are so many people who are still reading it and would love to know how it ends! |
 Suicidal Rose 2009-11-22 . chapter 37o.o
Why haven you updated Harry Potter and the Nightmares of Futures Past?
It is awesome, and you, as the author, get major kudos!
One question, why dosen't harry get a Firebolt? Hes a seeker, and they need the most speed, so it kinda makes more sence in my mind...
~Rose |
 NamelessHeretic 2009-11-22 . chapter 10First of all, great Peggy Sue fic.
I have one issue with this particular chapter, however. Whenever an owl delivers mail, they typically deliver it directly to a person through the nearest window. If the letter was for Harry, it would be delivered to his bedroom. The only reason he got it downstairs in CoS was because that's where he was after Dobby did his bit with the cake and disappeared. This chapter would've made more sense if Harry had had to chase a doxy downstairs and take it out with a spell, or if the doxy had chased off the Masons and Vernon figured it was Harry's fault, leading to the bars and whatnot.
I know I'm nit-picking a little, but that bugged me a bit. |
 Smilie-x 2009-11-22 . chapter 37I have just finished reading your story in a day. I have accomplished absolutely nothing else and my teachers will surely be very dissapointed in me, however, it was totally worth it!
You're writing skills are astounding and I respect how much thought you seem to have put into the plot. You have a real understanding of the characters and the original books.
WOW!!
Thank-you for uploading such a fabulous story onto this site, it is the best I have come across. =D Keep up the good work |
 glassdragon2 2009-11-20 . chapter 16Awesome, awesome chapter! I love the visit to Azkaban. Great job. Loved Harry's 'tactical immaturity.' Though I would have thought Arthur and the others would be a little more surprised/incredulous about the whole Sirius affair, not that they wouldn't' believe Harry and look into it, but they seemed to accept it maybe a little bit too easily, imho.
The scene with Arthur and the gun was positively chilling.
I forgot to mention this in previous reviews, but I love your creation of the goblin culture and the Wizard's 'MRI' that cracked me up. |
 glassdragon2 2009-11-20 . chapter 12Great chapter! I'm really interested in seeing how Harry's new guardians will change things. And him being Ginny's 'brother' hm... keep up the awesome work! (please!) |
 glassdragon2 2009-11-19 . chapter 11It's a great chapter and a wonderful story! You mentioned how readers often don't like it when a character makes a mistake. I do. It's the flaws and mistakes that make the characters human. Even knowing the future can't completely protect you.
Keep up the awesome work! |
 glassdragon2 2009-11-19 . chapter 9Great chapter! I love how at first Molly Weasley thinks a book on Quidditch was a poor choice for Ginny. Keep up the excellent writing! |
 glassdragon2 2009-11-19 . chapter 4Brilliant chapter! It will be interesting to answer the question about fate. Please keep up the brilliant work! |
 glassdragon2 2009-11-19 . chapter 2This is a brilliant story! The first chapter was amazing and this one is wonderfully written as well! I really do hope you finish this! |
 TT 2009-11-18 . chapter 37 How come you don't write your own stories and get them published? You certainly write well enough- I would know. On a completely different subject, it's amazing how much you fit in every chapter. Even if it takes longer to update, you don't have to read back as far to understand, and less often. You no longer write as much in AN's and I, at least, enjoy it. |
 Sage 2009-11-15 . chapter 35 Hey-love your story (: ... I don't know if you meant this, or if you'll even connect the reference, but when harry starts going on about 'let's pretend' I was reminded of my favorite author's work ender's shadow, just the part where bean is with sister carlotta before going to battle school...sorry about that aside, I really do admire your writing style and can't wait to read more!! |
 Melowa 2009-11-11 . chapter 37Hi, there.
This is one of the best stories I have ever read, and I read a LOT. Seriously, your tone is excellent, characters believable and lovable, and the amount of detail you manage to get across is incredible. I'd really like to know if this story is on hold permenantly, or if you're ever going to return to it?
Thanks!
Tash |
 KiTTy KaT 2009-11-10 . chapter 37 PLEASE UPDATE! |