"You thieving two-faced bastard!"
Do 11 year olds really swear like that??
Not that I'm complaining about the swearwords in general (Swearing relieves stress. Fact.), but it would seem a bit odd to me at 11 years old if someone my age yelled that at me.

By the way..fantastic story so far. It's pretty much channeling what every reader who's finished the whole series and then goes back to reading the first one would wish they could do to change events.
(Did that make sense?)

Sorry not an actual review but as I was reading this chapter I started wondering about the Half Blood Prince's old text book and if you had any intentions for Harry from NoFP to be looking into using it.

its all your fault hehe you made me stay up for almost 48 hours strait reading this story... please update soon!

I've been spending the better part of the last 2 or 3 weeks reading this story, and I love it. Worth all that time and months more. Keep up the good work!

great story

I really enjoyed NoFP as a whole, but then I expected no less after reading Team 8. Hopefully you'll continue this eventually.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE.
Great story, well written, so don't forget to UPDATE

Absolutely love the story. Just finished listening to Potterfic weekly podcast of it and am patiently waiting for updates. :)

Oh, the vicious vengeance of Harry with vicious, vindictive goblins on his side! It's so awsome! Like this fic.
I giggled hysterically over your A/N comment about toxic troll snot killing off the CHS's. (giggles some more).

Happy writing!
Moonfan

I'm really liking this story. It's not the first timetravel story I've read, nor will it be the last, but so far its actually one of the better ones on this site.

'eye-gouging orange cover of Flying with the Cannons'
That line reminds me of a line in "Harry Potter and the Host Club" by Stalker of Stories, in which Tonks' usual haircolor is described (rather acurately) as 'gouge my eyes out with a spoon pink.' Both ways, the line is funny, and so very true.
Keep up the good work!
Hope you're well and writing,
Moonfan

I have spent many happy days reading this. The intricacy of the plot and the subtle changes in character over a great deal of time? This is amazing! Many people don't have the patience to work in these elements, but you do it so skillfully! And it's so original!

If you have abandoned this story (and perhaps fanfiction) then I don't want to pressure you. If you are still writing, however, please continue this story!

Love Dawec

FElicidades! r

Phew, finally caught up, haha. Once again, excellent job on this story so far. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

Wow... It's been almost a year since the last update.. You sir are lucky I am a loyal follower odf this story. Hahahaha!

Wow, the ** really hit the fan with that one, huh? Stupid giant snake. One more chapter left til I'm caught up, haha!