too short and too fast but what the heck i admire your story!...
that was the shortest fanfic i have evr read but one of the stories that struck me...will you please send a message to me and help me post my fanfic. i do not know how to post a fanfic in this website...please send me some guidelines:)

Ooh... Neji is so OOC... being so straightforward! ^_^

lol i think that was cute...and yet random...but that would be so neji...he has to say his luv secretly BWHAHAHAHA...w/e

one thing u and i have in commen is our love for NejiXTenten!! YAY! best paring eva!! that was so cute!! u should write more fics!!

Mina

Kudasai? Don't you mean onegai? Hehe... sorry, I'm still learning. Anyway, yes cute, but from what I gather also is OOC . Some of the best fics are long, and the best confessions are the non-verbal type. Am I being too picky? Gomen nasai. I'm an avid writer/reader, and I get a little overwhelming with my critical side sometimes. Well, good fic; I hope to see more NejiTen moments!

Hiya! I Like it! Make more NejiTen!