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Reviews For: If Only

Akatsukilover2010 2006-12-26 ch 1,	abuseaw!
Heart's Door 2006-08-31 ch 1,	abuseOh my gosh. That was so touching. I almost cried even though I was half distracted by music!! >< Ack, it was wonderful! It was beautifully written! Even though Satoshi was a bit OOC, I think you still protrayed him well. The only reason he was OOC was because he's usually more reserved than that. But that's just cuz he doesn't like anyone yet in the manga anyway). (And Daisuke doesn't count.) You showed his soft side and it was definitely perfectedly portrayed!! I wish Sugisaki Yukiru (that is her name, right?) would hurry up and show that same soft side in the manga that you've written here! I must say though, Risa must be really stupid still if she's gonna get all upset over Satoshi telling her to hurry up for a movie that SHE booked. But ah well. At least it turned out all right. I especially like the part where she said “When you cry, they’re like frost, glittering in the winter sun." It was so poetic. >< I can't say that there's anything wrong with the story except for Risa's ditziness, really. You're definitely one of the best writers on fanfiction!
Shadow Rox!! 2006-06-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseOMGZERS! This is so good! Great!! I cried!! I love your writing!
Chibizu 2006-06-08 ch 1,	abuseOMG! That was so cute! Tears were threatening to come out of my eyes! :) And I nearly cried a tad 9alot) bit more when Risa pulled through cause sometimes I read she didn't...Either way! how KAWAI!
chocolatemaltesers 2006-02-02 ch 1,	abuseAw! Thats so sweet!!
Raberba girl 2005-12-30 ch 1,	abuseHey, this was pretty good. I like how Satoshi cares for Risa but is still characteristically bored with the shopping expedition. That line was funny, about Satoshi running after Dark all the time (though I suppose Risa's done her own share of Dark-chasing as well). Aw, that's sweet that he went and bought the dresses afterward. I liked the ice imagery for Satoshi, too, when Risa was talking about his tears. Dude, Holes! I loved that book! And the movie, too.
chiharu-tanaka 2005-11-11 ch 1,	abuseAw! This story is just full of lovey goodness!
StAnThEpLuNgErMaN 2005-11-09 ch 1,	abuseaw...dat wuz cute...even tho i despise risa wit a burning passion it was still uber cute!
Setsuna Hanajima 2005-11-02 ch 1,	abuseaw, kawaii!
renfox 2005-11-01 ch 1,	abuseI'm spporting Satoshi and Risa only!!
Miss Strange 2005-10-30 ch 1,	abuse^-^ luv it!
BlackAngel576 2005-10-30 ch 1,	abuseomg thats so cute! i luved that so much! i wish my relationship(if i ever get one other than my imaginary one with Dark...) would b like that write more write moire! i like ur stories bout Satoshi and Risa!!
Forever-Sapphire 2005-10-29 ch 1,	abuseThis story is just so adorable! To tell you the truth, I've never really thought about this pairing; Satoshi and Risa. But I like the way you made the story flow with them; I really believe in this pairing now! You've opened my eyes! (It seems like I'm always saying that phrase as of late!) Sapphire-chan
writingxcramp502 2005-10-29 ch 1,	abuseOh this is so cute!! and since when was there a contest? o well. I love this fic! it super cute! ok i'm being a bit weird but again, o well. -thumbs up- good job!
chidz 2005-10-29 ch 1,	abuse"simple yet elegant" I like these kind of stories. ^_~ Keep it up... kawaii~

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