Yeah, 'cause what's the good of a teenager that doesn't smirk and toss of sarcastic one-liners occasionally?
Slade's such a pedo... *sniggers*
But he has a remarkably sexy voice...

Really good impliment right here. I liked this a lot, great job!

Scary. I think you should change the summary a little, but this is really good. Nice job.

Hee! Loved the last 3 lines.

It was short and to the point--something that made me think about the plot after the story was finished. That's a hard thing to find in a story--something that is so blunt that it's not in a way. The last three lines held a lot of emotion. Wonderful job.

in Liebe, Red Tail