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| NKingy 2005-12-18 ch 3,  | abuseGood chappie and I like reading long chappies lol. Everyone seems to kill off Ian because he doesn't really feature much. Please update when you can Happy Holidays! |
| Milla Kuznetsov 2005-12-17 ch 3, | abuseCute! i loved it!! ^-^ poor Ian though!! please update soon! Byez!! ^^>>^^>>^^>>Milla Kuznetsov |
| Ice-wolf-16 2005-12-17 ch 3, | abusehey lots of people kill Ian who really cares. are you going to skip to the worlds or have something in da middle? anys I realy liked that chap |
| Ice-wolf-16 2005-12-09 ch 2, | abuseBryan had no clue what he was doing hehhehehe I like long chapies |
| Milla Kuznetsov 2005-12-08 ch 2, | abuseYay!! you updated!! ^-^ I loved it!! I wonder how Tala will react when he wakes up ~.^ Hee hee anyways, update whenever you can!! but i hope it's soon!! Loved it again! -^.^- Byez!! ^^>>^^>>^^>>Milla Kuznetsov |
| NKingy 2005-12-08 ch 2, | abuseserves Bryan right for being drunk, I'd like to find out how Hiro got his kneecap smashed in. Please update! and I feel your pain, school sucked for me too. |
| Winter-Rae 2005-11-12 ch 1, | abuseVery nice, you have a lot of talent. I really enjoyed this story. I love how you wrote the characters, the Tala/Bryan couple is always a good one. I hope you will be adding more soon. I would also like to add this story to my favorites if that is alright. Thanks. |
| animeobsession 2005-11-07 ch 1, | abuseWow! This is great! Write more of this soon, ne? |
| Milla Kuznetsov 2005-11-05 ch 1, | abusei liked it alot! i think it should be Bryan/Tala,and Bryan finding his sister and stuff! All and all i loved it!! |
| Streetcorner Symphony 2005-10-29 ch 1, | abuseI'm glad that you gave a reason for Tala's hormones. I was beginning to worry that he was just blatantly OOC. It's been long, but well worth it to see where the story is going. Hopefully, Tala and Bryan will get together ( after all, who doesn't like that pairing? ), and Alana will be found. The rest of the Blitzkrieg Boys seemed slightly out of character, but it seemed fitting for the story, like how they would act together. Great start. Keep up the good work. =) |
| party freak 2005-10-29 ch 1, anon. | abusewow this is a really good first chapter :O and so long! whoo! yeh this should definatly be Bryan/Tala i mean it would be missing something without it as its all so perfectly set up, with tala blatantly liking him. so plz update soon :) |
| NKingy 2005-10-29 ch 1, | abuseWow. I thought it was a oneshot when i saw how long it was, but if it's gonna be a story, please update! Tut tut, Blitzkrieg boys smoking. I never really considered reading much with the four russians in it, but your stuff works! Please update! NKingy xx |
| Ice-wolf-16 2005-10-28 ch 1, | abuseIt would be good if Bryan found his sister |