Wow... That was very sad... ;( I'm a fan of YzakNicol stuff. It's just one of those weird pairings where both the characters are just in sync enough for it to work. When you wrote "Don't cry" twice in a row it jolted me back to my own fanfiction, ironically titled "Don't Cry", and also an YzakNicol fic, if you'd like to swing by and take a gander. ^^ There's not enough Y/N fics on FF.N; I was surprised when I found this one. And I really liked it. It was slow, and real and raw, and it made my soul ache inside... Nicol should not have died, but like in real life, death can come unexpectedly, and he did. Very emotional. Nice job!

Lizz
~;~Shaku

You rock, can I say that?! You always seem to pick out the moments in the series that I love the most, the ones with the most angst, impact, flood of emotions, agony, heartache...the moments that you want to dwell on longer because they actually make you FEEL, the moments that make for great stories. This particular moment in the series was one of my favorites, just because of the raw emotions each character was portraying. I love that you wrote this piece and expanded on that. "'He went for you, do you realize that?' Yzak was screaming..." That line really got me for some reason. This whole thing was quite sad, but well written.

Okay kiddo, cease with the hesitancy about yaoi. There are tons of people who feel the same way you do. Meh... Or maybe I shouldn't chide you, hmm? When I first started getting into boy-on-boy pairings I felt the same way, like "AUGH! What am I doing! Everyone's innocence will be gone! And mine, too!" It was a very guilty process. And then after a while I just stopped caring. The situations seemed to work, I was having fun writing, so oh well. Slash SEED pairings it was. And then they just got increasingly worse on my part until it was too late to go back... Haha, wish I never got sucked that far in, but I did. xP Anyway, my point is, don't apologize for writing what you do, because you're not in this boat alone. :D You're good at writing it, and if you stopped it would deprive the rest of us fangirls of fun scenarios to read about.

Hm. Good job.

God, I swear you are the best fanfic writer in HISTORY! Shall Nicol/Yzak forever live on...

>.< Love it, yepsh. Gotta love it.

Great story! I've never read that pairing before. I'd like to beta read your stories if you want. I'd definately have enough time. Anyways, good story.

*cocks head thoughtfully* Well, that was very interesting, I remember watching the episode that related to that...lol. So ya need a beta reader huh? I wouldn't mind doing that, only if you would agree to it though. *grins* It up to you though, you've probly have other offers too...but I do happen to have knowledge of Gundam SEED, enough anyways to satisfy myself...I didn't get to see the last episodes though...that annoyed me...*mild glare at self* And I would...I think... have enough free time ta help ya out. Cause I've only got to work and go to the gym really...lol, sleep and eating doesn't matter at all! *chuckles* anyways, before I get on rambling about absolutely nothing, I'll say great job again, can't wait to see some more productiveness...and cyaz around on
Laterz
Storm

Yeah, I think I should be doing it. I love Gundam SEED. Can't tell you how many times I've cried while watching it. I love that one FanFic you did...Forever, My Song. I love the song in it, too (I memorized it). You really are good at writing. I've wanted to write a Gundam SEED FanFic for a while, but Lorraine (Raine) doesn't watch it, no matter what I do and say. And, yeah, Naruto's starting to grow on me, too.

Hope you'll pick me!
~Mellie of RAINEandMEL