This is one of the best Touya/Yukito Tsubasa fics =D It's very sweet and you brought out their problems of their relationship very well.

I also like the "hope" theme in the story, "Because it's Sakura, everything will absolutely be alright." (one of my fav CCS quotes) and "Always believe only in the future, even when it is made of sand castles".

Lovely job!

This was a great story, but I took particular interest in the title because it's a title of one of my favorite poems, and one I think you'll like:

Castles

I'm building castles in the sand,
to help me pass the time at hand.
To pass away the pain and hurt,
and wallow in a sea of dirt.
Although I know I can be wrong,
to dance to this new drummer's song.
Now I know that dreams must end,
and I will be fored to live again
in this crueld world another day,
to see my castles washed away.

I bit more depressing than your story, and not so much about living for the future, but I found the irony funny in the title, the quote, and this poem.

Anyways, Great story!

Sweet! I loved the Nakuru cameo, and the CCS reference at the end.

I loved your story, but you could add a little more to it. I'm not trying to tell you your writting is bad, because it isn't, I'm just saying that you could make the story even better. Well this was great and I really enojoy it. I love the pair of touya and yukito.

^^They are one of the best CLAMP couples...

wow.touya and yukito are my favorites.I was looking for them in tsubasa fiction and this is the only one I found and its great and so lovely.only too short.

this is god!

really, so appropiate... and it's obvious that you've read ccs, right?

love the fact you brought in clow too!

Simply Wonderful!! I love Clow making an appearance and him telling Touya and Yukito that they are tied by the bonds of fate as much as by love and magic. Kinda helps to know that fate wants you to be together as much as you do. *grin* I love the ending--by simply following his heart and having faith in his little sister, Touya brought hope to kingdom as well.

Anyways, Syaoran and Sakura will have no problem providing heirs--well, if Syaoran ever manages to be brave enough to stand up to his king--lol! But maybe Touya knowing that if he Doesn't let the 'brat' marry his sister, that he would have to provide an heir then-hehehehe! And I'm sure that Fai and Kurogane--if they end up going to Clow with them--will vouch for the kid and, after Touya does his manly thing and challenges Kurogane to a sword fight to prove the Kurogane is worthy enough to vouch for Syaoran and Yukito senses Fai's magic, talk the king into letting his sister get married. After all, when Fai and Kuro combine their forces, they can be mighty persuasive.

Yeah for the little ficlet--made me feel all warm inside and brightened my day.

What a lovely chapter. I read this before reading Chapter 95, but now that I have I like the story even better. It has a wistful feel to it but that's balanced by the optimism of Yukito and Touya and Clow. (I'm not familiar with CCS but I like the way you have portrayed these characters; they really do make a nice couple.)

*jumping up and down and squealing in joy* Dammit, they're even cuter than in CCS !! *0* I love it !! I love it iloveit iloveitiloveitiloveitiloveitiloveii-iitt *kisses the computer's screen*
I for one reeally don't mind the cheesy quotes. It only makes it cuter. Aww, this is awesome.
*happy sigh*

That was amazing. That was adorable Yuki/Touya fluff. I loved it. *melts*

To be more constructive... The plot was interesting, the story was perfectly paced, and you have a very clear, enjoyable-to-read writing style. ^^

Wow, you must got the chapter by downloading the raw manga in "fukanounashigoto" and got the translation from "Pikari-san's". Anyway, it's a cute story.

Awe yay! Toya/Yuki is my favorite CLAMP ship. They are so so cute together. This was a super sweet fic. Keep up the good work!