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Reviews For: Holding On

sunnygirl91
2005-12-16
ch 1,
abuseod, im crying so hard now. take that as a compliment, eh?
frostfalcon
2005-11-03
ch 1,
abuseNot bad a tall for 15 minutes... I'm hoping you're going to add to it maybe?
csifreak04
2005-10-31
ch 1,
abuseFor a 15 minute story, this was very good. I would like to find out if Greg makes it. Keep up the great work!
daily
2005-10-30
ch 1, anon.
abusenice chapter, hope you will make more chapters of it. if you did this in 15 minuts i'm curious how a chapter looks what cost you more time to write. they used radio's in the beginning but those came out of range if they went to far so they use cellphones then.
update soon
jojojojo01
2005-10-29
ch 1,
abuseGreat story, but i really think you have to continue so we know what happens to Greg. By the way i think the thing with the radio/phones is that the phones that they use can be used are mobile phones but they can also be used like radio's. (i think so anyway, but i might be wrong)
Xombe
2005-10-29
ch 1,
abuseAww...sad and sweet at the same time! Wonderful! Was this a oneshot or do you plan on continuing?
ShinodaBear
2005-10-29
ch 1,
abuse*Grabs a tissue* That was beautiful.
mizukimarr910
2005-10-29
ch 1, anon.
abuseplease write more i loved this it's got potential. please keep writing and update again soon.

thanx mizukimarr910
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