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CastaS
2006-10-08 . chapter 10
great story i enjoyed it much, i love it
and now reading the sequel
random person *cuz*
2005-12-10 . chapter 6
i have read to here so far. who knew u liked writing! i guess ur not so shy about it anymore.
surforst
2005-12-01 . chapter 10
Well finally got around to reading this. Nice though my one complaint is Shego reaction. Drakken crying and curling up but her. I see her more as a worried pacer. Besides that it was good. Though I could of told the Possible team they should have gone with the transforming truck. He is the leader of a team of rebels fighting the good fight for a planet so far way. If your looking for a way to solve the problem in the end of your next fic I highly recommend that one. Just a suggestion.

Anyway nice couple of chapters. I'm looking forward to the sequel and whatever else you got in the works.
SM
2005-12-01 . chapter 10
Nice ending. The sequel also sounds plenty crazy. (In a good way)
Bugleader
2005-12-01 . chapter 10
Oh man, Christine? You are a genious or are a really mad man,but I love your storie.
Jerry Unipeg
2005-12-01 . chapter 10
GREAT CHAPTER! Oh you EVIL, EVIL writer.
whitem
2005-12-01 . chapter 10
What? No Evil K.I.T.T? Maybe later, huh? How 'bout a tie-in with something REALLY old, My Mom the Car. Then there's the most famous, Chitty-Chitty Bang Bang!! HA! I can see a lot of potential here... :P
Jerry Unipeg
2005-11-27 . chapter 9
GREAT CHAPTER!! Nice ending to the chapter.
whitem
2005-11-27 . chapter 9
Awesome and cool! I definitely liked this crossover. Can't wait to see how ya do a sequel...
Jerry Unipeg
2005-11-25 . chapter 8
GREAT CHAPTER! Here is a best way to test it.
surforst
2005-11-25 . chapter 8
Cliffhangers are fun. I use them all the time. Keep the viewing audience coming back.

Anyway continuing along in the story. Waiting for the big explosions next chapter. Hopefully we get Drakken patented evil laugh at that point. It would fit so well for him.
hopeless-romantic-nr-one
2005-11-25 . chapter 8
I hate you for doing this to me! Just kidding :P, but plz update soon.
surforst
2005-11-21 . chapter 7
Hm...Ron stole my solution. Bah...though a giant robot who could bless large bodies of water would have been my choice anyway. Well my suggestion to the heroic duo is if this fails just build a large metal structure in space and then crash it into the general area of the car. Works against cities and pesky crazed machines.

Well looking forward to the next update and the coming sequel. Been an interesting 'ride' so far.
Jerry Unipeg
2005-11-20 . chapter 7
GREQAT CHAPTER! You would end the chapter that way.
Jerry Unipeg
2005-11-18 . chapter 6
GREAT CHAPTER! and history repeated it self.
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