 CastaS 2006-10-08 . chapter 10great story i enjoyed it much, i love it
and now reading the sequel |
 random person *cuz* 2005-12-10 . chapter 6 i have read to here so far. who knew u liked writing! i guess ur not so shy about it anymore. |
 surforst 2005-12-01 . chapter 10Well finally got around to reading this. Nice though my one complaint is Shego reaction. Drakken crying and curling up but her. I see her more as a worried pacer. Besides that it was good. Though I could of told the Possible team they should have gone with the transforming truck. He is the leader of a team of rebels fighting the good fight for a planet so far way. If your looking for a way to solve the problem in the end of your next fic I highly recommend that one. Just a suggestion.
Anyway nice couple of chapters. I'm looking forward to the sequel and whatever else you got in the works. |
 SM 2005-12-01 . chapter 10 Nice ending. The sequel also sounds plenty crazy. (In a good way) |
 Bugleader 2005-12-01 . chapter 10 Oh man, Christine? You are a genious or are a really mad man,but I love your storie. |
 Jerry Unipeg 2005-12-01 . chapter 10GREAT CHAPTER! Oh you EVIL, EVIL writer. |
 whitem 2005-12-01 . chapter 10What? No Evil K.I.T.T? Maybe later, huh? How 'bout a tie-in with something REALLY old, My Mom the Car. Then there's the most famous, Chitty-Chitty Bang Bang!! HA! I can see a lot of potential here... :P |
 Jerry Unipeg 2005-11-27 . chapter 9GREAT CHAPTER!! Nice ending to the chapter. |
 whitem 2005-11-27 . chapter 9Awesome and cool! I definitely liked this crossover. Can't wait to see how ya do a sequel... |
 Jerry Unipeg 2005-11-25 . chapter 8GREAT CHAPTER! Here is a best way to test it. |
 surforst 2005-11-25 . chapter 8Cliffhangers are fun. I use them all the time. Keep the viewing audience coming back.
Anyway continuing along in the story. Waiting for the big explosions next chapter. Hopefully we get Drakken patented evil laugh at that point. It would fit so well for him. |
 hopeless-romantic-nr-one 2005-11-25 . chapter 8I hate you for doing this to me! Just kidding :P, but plz update soon. |
 surforst 2005-11-21 . chapter 7Hm...Ron stole my solution. Bah...though a giant robot who could bless large bodies of water would have been my choice anyway. Well my suggestion to the heroic duo is if this fails just build a large metal structure in space and then crash it into the general area of the car. Works against cities and pesky crazed machines.
Well looking forward to the next update and the coming sequel. Been an interesting 'ride' so far. |
 Jerry Unipeg 2005-11-20 . chapter 7GREQAT CHAPTER! You would end the chapter that way. |
 Jerry Unipeg 2005-11-18 . chapter 6GREAT CHAPTER! and history repeated it self. |