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-SmilingArtist-
2009-06-30 . chapter 1
Aww...That was so sweet.
I prefer LeeTen over NejiTen and LeeSaku any day.
^^
OrigamiPaperAngel
2009-04-04 . chapter 1
WHOO 20th review x33 *loves being a reviewer whose review number has a 0, however dumb and repetitive that sounds*
LeeTen is love
Hiroro
2008-11-14 . chapter 1
LAWL The fic ish awesome! One-sided love! ♥

I DO hope that Lee will notice her someday. And he'll love her as well... *daydreams*

*snaps out* Anyways, I spotted two spelling errors, but that won't damage anything from this awesome fic.

Keep writing LeeTen! *shot*
OCQueen
2008-04-16 . chapter 1
AIE!!
So cute!
Neji doesn't deserve Tenten &D
pichu101
2008-02-11 . chapter 1
Good job kid! I think it was realy good. You did a good job telling how Tenten came to like Lee. The ending was great too. I can't stand when something is so fluffy; it makes me sick.Way to go!
ravengal
2008-01-03 . chapter 1
Yay! ^.^ A Lee/Tenten fic! These things are so rare it's unbelievable! XD At times, I've thought, "Should I just convert to a Neji/Tenten fan and be done with it?" but no! It's things like this fic that keep me a solid Lee/Tenten fan! YOSH!

Aww, how sweet was this fic? ^^ Iespecially liked when you said 'She was really lucky to have a teammate like him - youthful, vivacious, exuberant and funny. Kind of like Naruto at times, but Lee is Lee, a more mature type of person.' SO TRUE! I love Lee-kun. ;D (CHING!)

ravengal out x
Shinjite Florana
2007-08-23 . chapter 1
YOSH! It's great! I think I may be doing that circumlocution (My god... how do you pronounce that thing?!) thingy too. Love, un!

Oh, and remember, every time some one writes a Lee-Tenten fic, Gaara gets a cookie. (cuz Lee was taken. O_o) wuvuls!
~Shinjite Florana
der kleine fuchs
2007-04-21 . chapter 1
Oh, I LOVE LeeTen! This was really sweet, and I think you potrayed them well.
Hikari Midori-chan
2006-12-22 . chapter 1
I like it. It's totally in-character and it was really cute too! Great job!
Konrad
2006-11-09 . chapter 1
It's good! Yeah, I know what you mean about circumlocution, lol
ms. phishy
2006-10-08 . chapter 1
Are you really 13 (or 14, since this was written last year)? Well, you write better than a lot of people on this site ;-). This story was great and I look forward to more from you! *strikes nice guy pose* To the power of YOUTH!
Angelic-Demonic Puppet
2006-05-31 . chapter 1
Aww, cute! I read your profile, and it said that you couldn't stand her {Tenten} because she had no attitude? I guess your right, but that's what makes her so fun to write. You can make her bitchy, sweet, shy, or anything you want! Your write her so well to! love the story!
LostsoulofRegret
2006-05-28 . chapter 1
i thought it was great...sad at the ending though...please make another...pretty please!! it was really good...no it was wonderful...you did Lee great and Tenten...please do another...I'm out...

LostsoulofRegret
Maiyuko-chan
2006-04-13 . chapter 1
This.. was so good... and sorta sad. TT-TT ^__^ This is so great... maybe you could write more. I know it's a weird thing to say, but it would be easy to elaborate on. ^^ Anyway, keep writing!!
Melancholic
2006-02-08 . chapter 1
More I need more!
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