ok, i was GOING to read this, then I saw the update date and figured you won't ever post again, so im not going to read it, b/c nothing's worse than starting a good fanfic and for it to never be finished...

Sorry I haven't reviewed before, but I've read this story before, on my friend's computer :P
So, yeah (y)
It's a brilliant story, and I love how you've portrayed the Marauders and Lily and Snape :P
It's brilliant :D
Lol. Can't wait for more!!

crap crapper crap. I thought this story was already completed... Now I have to wait for another perfect chapter that (by the looks of the updating-date) will never come! Anyway, I love where this story is going so far: humor and a pretty important plotpoint of the series, all in one...
I hope my review will make the update go a bit faster!
x-mokimik-x

its very good. i love it

*CRIES* Why have you deserted us! Daisy Penifold, why haven't you put up your chapter? I am quite desolate, i really want to know whta is going to happen next, But you people apparently haven't updated in two years! SO PLEASE please please, update soon or at least get back to me, with a possibility of when you will be updating. As that is a horrible place to leave the chapter nevermind for how long you have left it!
So this is begging you to update!! Ellie x

Oh, I think it's brilliant! I really like how the story is not only focused on Lily and James and all the tension between them, because when you do a fic like that then it's too cheesy, you know? *cringes, as I have been guilty of fics like that*

I really like how you're tying canon into the story, and Lily's conversation with Grace. "Am I the only one who cares about Quidditch?" "You don't even like Quidditch, Lily." Naturally, Lily ignored her.

definitely reccomend

I think Fork in the Eye is an excellent title for this story, I must say.

It's good how Lily resents Malfoy, not only because he's Malfoy, but also because he's a Slytherin and Death Eater.

I just love all the little details that make it really intricate and well done all around.

Oh my gosh! I'm sorry, it's just so fricking funny!

Lol. This is hilarious! Don't you ever wonder what the background characters, like little second years, think of everyone like Lily and James?

Wow, this was a really good opening chapter, and I'm excited to see how the story continues. You guys have some of my favorite authors on fanfiction, so I'm looking forward to your collaborated masterpiece. Off for seconds!

Aw... poor Peter. I think that's the second best chapter. Now, I read this because my staff member put it on my C2, and I'm really glad that I did read it. This is hilarious!