this as very funny!

But it DID have a bit of an abrupt ending...

And did you mean to have Fai call him Kurogane at the end? I just noticed that, nya

I LOVE iceskating! *leap, twirl*

But but... I feel so BAD for Kuro-wanko... -sniffs- The poor guy can't ice skate for his life...

Anyway, funny, rather cute. Mokona can tease him quite a lot now, can he? xD Fai should've like, jumped to the rescue, saving him from falling! [Has like, totally become a Fagane [Yes, I made that up right now] fan. Not good.] ANYWAY! Awesome one-shot, still very cute. Aja aja Kuro-wanwan! :D

-Muffinizer

Poor Kurorin! But thanks for writing this, it's really funny. . You should add an ending to it, since it just leaves the reader, "hanging," there.

That was SO funny! I love how Fai is always calling Kurogane some wierd some-thing or other, I think you keept them in character real well.

yes, yes, YES! This was so funny. I relly liked the way you did Kurogane's action, is really funny! I loved it! XD

Just so cute and lovely! It would be wonderful to see it!

It was cute, nice job with Fai's names for Kurogane. Sweet.

This was super cute! So kawaii! So adorable!