4am... This was an amazing story. I am shocked how brilliant it is. I was used to reading merely excellent ones. I hold your skill to my deepest esteem. I didn't even miss Artemis. IF there would be anything to be added, it would be the 14 years of training from her dad. However, I am not even sure it would be a valuable addition. It is certainly not necessary. I simply didn't want the story to finish.

So, an Artemis Fowl story without so much as a single Fowl or fairy in it... which explains why I haven't read this story before.

But WOW. This story is absolutely AMAZING- and you may want to know that the only other AF stories I've said that about were AgiVega's. I can't really call this an Artemis Fowl story, since it's just so unlike Colfer's series in many ways, but it feels very much like a Splinter Cell or Covert One book.

Both of your main characters are developed beautifully, and the storyline is very tied together quite nicely. This backstory for Madame Ko works in well for her motivation to start an elite bodyguarding school, and personally, I'll be considering Flame of the Gods part of canon.

I'll be looking forward to whatever incredible fic you might have coming up!

-GMontag

Me:Where is my Arty? this is an Artemis fowl fanfic. and I NEED my arty!
Artemis: It would be greatly apreciated if you would stop calling me that idiotic name.
Me: Quiet arty! anyway WHY IS THERE NO ARTY AND BUTLER? *glomps artemis*

nice story, u tied everything in so well

I loved your story of Madame Ko! The books don't mention her except in association with her school, and I love how you delved into her character. The action was great, you really have a knack for writing great action scenes. I was sad that Zane had to die, but I know that it was necesary. Thank you for sharing your story.

drop the romance. definetly. this is NOT a romance story. it's an adventures story. with a lot of fighting.

by the way, Valerie always says 'baby'. does her brother not have a name?

Not only is this fic in my fav story, you're also in my fav author list!

oh my... oh my... I love this fic! *weeps for the loss of Zane* Wahh!! I think that you have inspired me to write a Artemis fic too...

*sobs* Wah!!... *sobs* Valerie! *cries in anguish* How could you!

Lol, that's funny! Lol Seroiusly...

Oh...! I would like to learn that!

I get that problem too. People vistiing my story then not reviewing. Sigh... Oh well, must say that so far, this has kept mt attention! Good fic! :D

I`m not going to like you `till you shut up about Judgement Day!

I read one of your other fics, and I have a question-
DO YOU EVER SHUT UP ABOUT JUDGEMENT DAY?

Finally finished it. You did an excellent job. I really liked this one. Zane dieing was pretty sad, though well written. The entire fic was. Can't wait to read more from you.