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| Lady Arabella Malfoy 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abusebrilliant idea. i wonder what joker would choose... you really choose write some continuation, thought it will be all smutty either way... |
| Harleen-Napier 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseYou should be glad to hear you just earned the title of "The Best Damn Fan-Fiction Author Ever" in the books of Harleen-Napier. This is the line that got me: "I swear I’ll die before posting JHQ fluff –shudders-" Thank you! I ABHOR Joker/Harley Fluff. It's just so... not right. Plus your fanfictions have to be some of the best stuff I've ever read. Thank you! |
| SaJi 2007-07-26 ch 1, | abuseAnother wonderful drabble. I especially liked this line, "Should he laugh at the ridiculous idea or hit the guy for having suggested it?" |
| Thyme In Her Eyes 2005-11-01 ch 1, | abuseOoh, what a delicious Halloween treat! ^_^ This made for lovely light reading - it's light, cute, funny and smoothly-written, but wasn't boring or fluffy. You've got a great sense of comedic timing in your writing and your style is so precise - it doesn't feel as though a single word needs to be added. It was a treat to see more of the hired goons, and I *loved* Joker's interaction with his dim henchmen (and I loved the idea that who Harley is and his relationship with her is something he thinks ought to be obvious to everyone), and it's great to see him without her, and how he's managing. Like you told me recently: she's like microwave cooking - people got by fine before it was available, but once you get used to it... ;) "Because, you know, it created the absurd impression that he missed her." Methinks the Joker doth protest too much... XD Seriously, I don't know you can sometimes doubt your grip on Joker's characterization - you have him down great here. You really have the ability to write the idea of gassing a bunch of innocent kids with Smilex jack-o-lanterns seem really amusing! XD His impatience, temper, complete inability to accept certain ideas, the need to make trouble, the sheer joy that his crimes give him, the dissatisfaction and blue mood that comes with pulling off a crime that lacks all the right attention-grabbing glamour and elements of fun...you write him wonderfully! =) And I *adored* the ending! And the gun and lollipop were excellent touches. Spicy, suggestive stuff. ;) Brilliant timing, and a killer closing line! |
| Kelly Renee 2005-10-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseO, what a treat! =D I just LOVE *ehm* happy endings! *laughs* Keep up the great work! You're BRILLIANT!! |
| Sno-Chan 2005-10-29 ch 1, | abuseA fanfic written because of little old me? Oh, I am *flattered*. This was just awesome, hon. You ended at just the right line. And don't worry about you posting JHQ fluff: I'll be first in line to rough you up if Thyme doesn't get there first. ^_~ |
| KeiraLeChat 2005-10-29 ch 1, | abuseHe he.. thanx for that, that was a beautiful way to start halloween. ;o) It is amazing how you can fit such a powerfull story into a one-shot like that. Thanx |