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Reviews for: Lunchtime
meandsesshy
2007-04-12 . chapter 1
aw... ed's so cute when he's all pouty! lol, good job!
xXnumbertwoXx
2006-04-16 . chapter 1
heh ed would prbly hate it if al fed him! hes too damn proud of his studly macho manliness, rite ed?
ed: ...
Shadow's Illusion
2006-04-04 . chapter 1
Ling: HAHAHAHAHA! GREAT AUTHORESS, HUMILIATE ED MORE! IT IS OF GREAT INTEREST!

Ed: Shut up, bastard.
Solo Maxwell-Yamato
2006-03-22 . chapter 1
*snickers* Love this.
keemew2
2006-01-29 . chapter 1
UMEKO!
Coolies! I came in here to see if any manga fans posted anything so I typed in my favorite manga only character in the search engine and what do I find? The translator!
And your story is just absolutly ADORABLE!
I love sulking Ed.
Even better I love Al adn Ling, but that beside the point.
Good job on the sotry, albeit the story is quite short but that's okay. I'm gonna click on your authors profile anyway and see what else you've done.
Bye, bye!
Samara-chan
2006-01-19 . chapter 1
OMG HAHA!! That was adorable!! I love Sulking!Ed ^^ Then again, I love Ed, period. Awesome fic!
KatYoukai
2005-12-20 . chapter 1
XD funniness... Yes! More Ling! Ling is teh awesome!! *has been hungrily eating up mangaversa fics with Ling in them* >.> I finally decided to keep going with the fma manga... and this is what I'm reduced to... *shakes head* Anyways, awesome job... though I think Ed likes food enough to try something drastic (like slam his head into the tray ad try to eat with his face XD) but throwing a fit would definetely have been second XD
star
2005-11-08 . chapter 1
that was funny! LOL :D
Kinoshita Kristanite
2005-10-30 . chapter 1
Oh, to funny
Henrika
2005-10-30 . chapter 1
Cute. Seems just like something Ed would do. Keep writing!
AlchemistKosame
2005-10-29 . chapter 1
this was so funny, i printed it out to show my freind, good stuff, good stuff
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