awesome chapter! keep it up!

nice update you have here. i like matt's flashback since it gave me more information on the character (i have never played time splitters).

just one thing that i am a little intrested in. lilo with her experiment form, is it something that Delta Operator made himself or is he using my version. i don't mind at all i am just wondering. anyway update soon!

Good chapter! I wonder what are they gonna do with 627 Virus...

Kicks-ass dude, even though i'm helping to write this fic its still killing me to find out what happens next.

"The nations of the world will have to unite, for the next war will be an interplanetary war. The nations of Earth must someday make a common front against attack by people from other planets"-General Douglas MacArthur, 1955

poor lilo! So much suspence in this chappie! I like it!

Great chapter! I see you used my feature on the blood-red eyes. It's fine. But next time, can you please tell me first? Anyway, great chapter. Your saga is interesting. I like "Timsplitters Future Perfect" too. I was a big fan of it. I have a suggestion on a weapon. It's called the "Plasma Shotgun," or PS-I for short.

I'm thinking of writing a fic where Jumba and maybe Pleakley become experiments through Jumba being stupid... would you put it in your C2?

Carry on please, I'm curious as to what Kila's description will be used for.

Ya know its funny, me reviewing this fic, a fic that I'm co-authoring...oh well. Just here to tell everyone that the next chapter will be out as soon as possible.

nice story so far and with Delta Operator co writing this as well it should very well stay this good if not better. i can't wait to see what happens next so update soon!

ooh i like! The suspence. I wonder what 624 virus is up to.

again you should probably work on the format. nice length for a chapter. and all of the scenes are excelently coreographed..

No i havent dissapeared i had a internet black out at my house due to an unpaid bill*bills suck*. anywho the update was great, update soon...or else!*pointing FN P90 SMG at something other than your head...u probably dont wanna know what it is!*

Whoa. That is Incredibly strang. Well I LIked it and I have no Choice but to give you a :]!

It's 'Pelekai,' not 'Palakai,' but other than that I can't think of anything bad to say. You're good.

Great chapter! So Dark Angel looks just like the original Angel, or is she shadowy looking. She should be shadow looking with no mouth, blood-red eyes, and have an evil red "V" symbol on her chest for virus. That's how I would picture her.