Perhaps this is just years way too late, but I really loved this. Contrary to what you may think, you've gotten Dorothy right down pat. :)

Off to reading the sequel; thanks for this! Will go down my faves because it's awesome that way.

...I don't read Gundam Wing fics unless I either know the author or the fics are recommended to me by someone whose taste in good writing I know I can trust (which is much the same way I handle Harry Potter fic)...but I'm considering your excellent G fics enough of a recommendation to check out your Wing work...and I must say, I'm not at ALL disappointed. I've always loved the idea of a strong Quatre/Dorothy dynamic, romantic or platonic, either way. You've got both characters well IN character here; their interaction just really drew me into all the emotions involved. Excellent job and I'll be sure to check out your other Wing and G fics!

great stuff. 'score one for the Q-man' gotta love than. Beautifully written. )

this was so good

From your girl Isis the vampire Queen

Score one for the Q-man indeed. lol This definately needs either a sequal or a 2nd chapter. This is at way too good of a point to simply end it there. I love your one-shots, but this one is begging to be continued.

Nice.

... wow... This story was incredible. From the first line down to the last. Touching. I know how hard it is to capture Dorothy's sometimes-scitzophrenic personality, but you did a marvelous job! b e a u t i f u l Going on my favorite stories!

Wow. That was an awesome story! I liked the way your portrayed Dorothy's character through an incredible use of words. Keep up the good work!

you better finish this or(pulls out a shotgun) I'LL KILL YOU!

ooh...i'm not much of a dorothy fan but that was really good!

Very good; I enjoyed it. You had grammar errors here and there - most notably, your negligence to start a new paragraph with each new speaker - but otherwise it was fine, and a great fic.

Awww... that was sweet I haven't read a 4xD in such along time. I can't believe how much I've missed it! I'm glad some people out the write fics b'out this couple.If you want my opinion I luv this couple! They are my favourite! Beside 1xR... Anyways You did do a good job in keeping Dorothy in character! o-I should know cause Dorothy Is my fav character in GundamWing!

THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOO SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET! *sighs* ahhhh Quatre...

oooh, i like! keep it up. you have to do another chapter. i need to know what happens between them.

That's cool, its kinda sweet but somehow sad i like it