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Bismarck's Otto 12/3/06 . chapter 5
This is probably the best Les Miserables fic I was able to find. Thank you very much for putting it here!
Tsunami Wave 1/7/06 . chapter 3
*sniffles and snuggles her Grantaire doll* ;_;
Tsunami Wave 12/3/05 . chapter 5
Beautiful.
Mizamour 6/5/05 . chapter 5
Wow! That was truly awesome. I love your writing! Write more!
Mizamour 6/5/05 . chapter 4
Oh, this is great! Awesome!
Mizamour 6/5/05 . chapter 3
Wow, wow, wow. Poor Grantaire! But this is so good...wow! I have a few Misfics if you'd like to read them, btw...my best one, Les Mis in a Minute (parody) was taken off twice (don't know why, really - I was careful about all the rules) but I have a few others...
Mizamour 6/5/05 . chapter 2
Awesome Courfeyrac characterization! I love your writing - you don't seem new at fanfiction.
Mizamour 6/5/05 . chapter 1
O, awesome! I love Jean-Luc and Gavroche! Yippee! I love Les Mis!
Morauko 4/15/02 . chapter 5
That was really really really good!
Ksorcere 3/9/02 . chapter 5
*sniffles muchly* This was excellent. Very well-written, wonderful imagery and good characterization. I am in awe.
distaff.exile 1/14/02 . chapter 5
Wow. This is one of those stories that just kicks you in the gut, makes you really feel what the characters are going through. I really felt Grantaire's hero-worship in this, knew what it was to wish to die for Enjolras. Such a gift is rare; use yours when you can, and you will find yourself enchanting many a reader. Best wishes - Kip
Manon 12/5/01 . chapter 5
Oh, spirrogg. *sighs melancholically* I do love this. You have a beautiful way with words. The first two chapters especially are wonderful, really evocative. The last three seem a bit rushed; maybe you could go back to them? ...A few things - in ch. 3, "unredeemable" should be "irredeemable", and I think although I am not completely sure that in the word "emeute" the accent mark is on the first letter, not the last.

Some of the bits from Grantaire's POV seem a little too drawn-out; you dwell on the details to the point where the narrative gets bogged down in them, for example the passage beginning with "Grantaire trailed his fingers...", etc. On the other hand, Enjolras's bit is a little too sketchy; I'm not quite sure what you meant to convey by it. You do a good job telling us what's going on in Courfey's and R's minds; it would be good if you did the same here.

Overall, though, it's beautiful. I really love the ending. But I want to know what happens with Jean-Luc - he's adorable :)
Yvi 9/29/01 . chapter 5
Oh... Ineloquence prevails. For me, that is, not you. Heavens, that was... something a lot better than good. I love the way you described each of the Amis' deaths. And I truly don't see how this ending could possibly disgust you.
Taskir 6/9/01 . chapter 3
I am a glutton for barricade-y angst and pain and punishment; please keep writing! :)
Hillary 5/30/01 . chapter 1
Very nice so far. Hehe, Gavroche happens to be my favorite character. But I've only seen the musical, I haven't read the book yet. Spelling, punctuation and junk is all good.
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