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kay
2007-09-10
ch 4, anon.
abuseHello, I just read your story fear, and you were right, I felt fear all through the story. What I can't understand is why there has to be booze at patries anymore. I thought at first it was lindsay, but was glad and sad that a young woman lost her life But when she hauled off and let thast creep have it I'd cheered! And as for catherine and lilly, they both need to go to therpy as soon as possible.This story, if you don't mind I'd like to share it with some younger friends of mine, hopefully it will never happen to them,
Drusilla Braun
2005-10-30
ch 4,
abusethanks for the safe halloween tips. I like flashlights. This was good
Linwe Melwasul
2005-10-30
ch 4, anon.
abuseReally good story. Interesting how they thought the dead girl was a couple of different people. Short and Sweet. Excellent.
Drusilla Braun
2005-10-29
ch 2,
abuseplease please please please please please continue. Though not happy Lindsey dead. But please please continue. For all we know she may not be dead. Maybe the person calling Catherine took her. Maybe I want more! I do! Please? ... Please? I'll beg. Don't make me beg. Okay have I scared you because I'm sorry if I have. By the way I want more. Oh and really really good job =)
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