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| Melody of the Sea 2007-11-07 ch 1,  | abuseThat was my first ever Kilik an Xianghua lemon fic I ever read. Awesome! |
| heaven-monument 2006-12-07 ch 1, | abuseWhat the hell is a boa staff? Bo staff. B - O. Bo. Also known as (Insert Japanese number here)shakubo. Example: Roshakubo (around 6ft bo). Once again, BO! Sheesh. |
| Midnight Crystal Sage 2006-11-04 ch 1, | abuse*jumps for joy* I finally found a KilikxXianghua FanFic. I always thought they'd make a cute couple...aw... I'd be happy to be bridesmaid at the wedding... |
| blood nymph 2006-09-26 ch 1, | abuseyou make me very happy! i've been tying to find a lemon between them FOREVER! and this one was really really good. Very much detail, though i think you over use the phrase 'Northern Star.' That is just my opinion. other wise it's awsome beond awsome-ness! |
| M. Bautista 2006-06-26 ch 1, | abusethis was nice. Im not perverted or anything, but i really liked how u made it in the midst of their destined battle. Good job. XD great story. |
| Hanzatsu-Hime 2006-05-26 ch 1, | abuseAll i can truly say is Wow! hat was truly well done!! You should definitely be proud of this piece! ^_^ Keep on writing! ^_^ |
| Alan 2006-01-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, this was a true peice of art. A good meaning. As a one-shot however, i must give it a 9/10. There is always room for improvement. So close to a 10/10. Good job. |
| Angelic Theif 2006-01-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really liked it! You had some spelling mistakes, and you jumped from past tense to present and back again quite a bit, but we all have mistakes! All in all, I really enjoyed reading it! |
| Dark Paper Wind 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abuseHi. I'm Dark Paper Wind. I liked your story and I just want to commend you on your work. Can you write another one soon? Thanks a bunch! Sincerly, Dark Paper Wind |
| anime/videogame freak 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abusei liked it i thought it was very touching |
| The Honest Harlequin 2005-12-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm sure that if the fighters knew that all they needed was spooge in order to get rid of Soul Edge, the game certainly could have been a lot more... interesting. Heheh... alright, no. No, I killed it. broke its leg and shot it in the head. Not the best story I've ever read, but then again, I read a lot of stories. There didn't seem to be a lot of substance to it... Some things, like this, seem to need more than a one-shot for it to feel complete. However, that doesn't mean that the story was terrible at all-- I'm just realy picky. We'll have to give it a 3.5 out of 5, dear. A noble effort. |
| gary loves sporks 2005-12-11 ch 1, | abusebeautiful absolutely beautiful :) |
| Galux Kitty 2005-11-25 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful fic... and about my favourite pairing, too. I loved it. |
| foxegirl90 2005-11-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseAWESOME! That was so romantic ^_^ |
| BattlefrontExplorer 2005-11-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseReading this makes me cry. Truly great. |