was that the end? good fic

ben

Aww, that was sweet. Or at least the very ending was sweet, I wanted to smack Zuko when he was screaming at her. Great job, this was fabu!

aw that's such a sweet ending! and i usually don't like short stories! weird! but it was REALLY good!
keep at it!

Memories, all alone in the moonlight, i can smile at the old days, life was beaufiful then. I remember the time i knew what happiness was, let the memories, live again.
Haha, i think it's funny you didn't like her either.

"I just am." that's not an answer, that's an escape.
"What's it to you bub?" why couldn't she have said "i'll tell you one Day" or something corny like that?
wait...who called her a wench? Zuko? Iroh? all it says is he...
Oh..it was zuko. ok.
...she just kinda appeared home? just like that?
well...this is kinda dissapointing...but, eh. I didn't really enjoy that story very much. you could have done better, i know you can.
SeethingXshadows

very cute and original, can't wait for more!

Sorry, it took me quite a while to finally review for this chapter. I really liked it! Especially how you incorperated the whole Aisheteru thing. Oh my gosh! Rogue is pretty much my favorite character! There was quiet a while where I hated her guts, but then I realized it's because I'm so much like her. I just wish I had super strength and could fly. I wouldn't even mind not being able to touch people. People are icky. And the especially icky ones I could just sap the life out of.

PLEASE keep writing! I love this whole plot! And the memory power is really cool! I'm just thinking you should add some romance to draw in other girls attention to the story! And if you did add romance would it be a SokkaxOC(I love those)?

P.S. I love pickles! xD

wow, go DAY! tHAT GIRL HAS some ATTITUDE! how come, whern the gaurd touched her to pick her up, she didn't go blind? oh well. i read ASHITERU and it was good, althoghu sorry i haven't reviewed yet ( althoguh i know there was a reason... i'll have to remember why) oh, and, as for your crush, i'm still at the stage where boys are your best friends, so i'm not that good in that area. oh, well.
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OK, love the story but theres a prob.
Zhao would not have known about her powers, so he would have been surprised about her knowing about Keisha, also he never said he was an admiral so technically the fact that she'd lied to him should have ** him off tuns more.
Other than that though this is a great fic. I see much potential in you as a writer YOU GO GIRL!!

cool chappie. who is Keisha? and update please

well, he is your best friend...so...i dunno. I'm sure that he just considers you his friend, and nothing else really. Sorry that sucks, but it's probably true. *hands over box of chocolate.*
Only three chapters? wow...ok. so, it's like a three-shot! hah, i crack myself up.

Wow...this girl has such an attitude, i would slap her.
Good job potraying Zhao...but i have to agree with him. i don't like Day! don't look at me like that, i don't like her! she has too much of an attitude! which, is actuallya good thing, cause then she's not a cardboard cutout. so, yay. but, ERG! i don't like her.
SeethingxShadows

Hey, can you tell "ILuVeLeMrS!!" that if she/he reads my story, then to review? cause, i read your reviews (yea, i'm awesome like that.) and i read that she reads my story...but she's never reviewed...and...you know what i mean?
Ok. Sorry cause this sounds mean and stuff. Like i said, long day at work. Hm...i need to eat dinner.
SeethingxShadows (again)

Hm...she can see memories. WEIRD but ORIGIONAL! YAY.
(Ps. sorry it took so long to update, i've been busy. Ok, gonna start reading now.)

“I stayed in my room, wrote stories, and posted them on Fan Fiction" HAHAHA YES.
Why is she so mean to Robert? is he just one of those kids who you can't stand?
Bison? Hm...reincarnations of Aang?
WHOA. Definitly just had a brainstorm. Katara's reincarnation...phowar. Story of that. hm...*ponders*. Naw...never mind.
HEY! That's me! *points*. I'm special. YAY.
How sad, Day didn't get to see if i updated! The poor dear! (just kidding, i'm just being retarded. Long day at work, give me a break.)
Of coarse it's Prince Zuko. I mean, you went to wash your face, in a forest...wow. Expected.
Oh dear, cliff hanger.
why'd she scream? i mean, i would have screamed also, cause he's gorgeous. But...eh. whatev.
SeethingxShadows

sweet story. please update, I want to know what happens. And I like your OC's power. IT'S SO COOL!

SPLEE! Anuther good one! So does she get memories from her cat as well? Hee hee. That'd be funny if she squished a spider and suddenly got memories of eating flies. Sorry, my sense of humor is really weird as you can probably tell by this point. Can't wait for more!